this story was so fucking weird lol
IM GLAD U AGREE LOL bc.. i feel like the personalities weren't constant(?) especially for purple hair guy how is he going to act so cocky and sneaky and then become this awkward shy boy the next?? also why does everyone get a boyfriend like wtf. dude gets rejected but its okay cause he can find someone else AND THEN EVERYBODY IS RELATED SOMEHOW TO EACHOTHER??? bruh and the artstyle was rly pretty but everyone only had two expressions,, blushing and :o
Omg yeah the whole trope of how everyone was related somehow to one another...lol too much unnecessary angst/drama like why ( ̄へ ̄)and I wish the purple haired dude didn't turn into this shy dainty character?? His cocky attitude was refreshing idk ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍ this is not a bad read and it's a nice plot but definitely hated some parts too(╯°Д °)╯╧╧
honestly sorry for disliking so repulsively it was just on instinct bc I loved this bl so much even if it’s not entirely realistic
I actually agree w/ everything you said except somehow my mind just ignores the flaws bc I’m distracted by all the things I love about it (jazz, lament, bl)
I thought it was really odd how Seheon’s dad was somehow related to his death.
But that’s the thing, if you aren’t writing a story with coincidental things happening that get your mc into trouble, then where’s the interesting part? Stories aren't supposed to be realistic. They're supposed to give the illusion of being real, from the way life unfolds to the way people speak and to the way the world is portrayed. But none of it is realistic when you take a magnifying glass to it
and I admit I disliked how she evolved purple-haired guy, but nevertheless enjoyed their part
toga : (
i think she's moreso mad because a hero killed him. Hero's are suppose to save everyone right??? So why are the villains exceptions?? I think she's mad because the hero's are hypocrites. They shouldn't be aiming to kill the villains if they're true hero's is what i'm thinking she's thinking. Which is why she tested uraraka
Yeah, the thing is, heroes aren't allowed to do that, which is why I'm confused abt that part cuz they keep making hawks do messed up stuff, but thats what makes them a fucked up system. I don't understand what she tested Uraraka for, she wouldn't try to kill her or anything. I don't think you can save people who don't want to be saved yk










the length of these chapters are really nice