
I kinda like the girls in this story; they don't get in the way of the story telling and are strong -> flame girl at least is.
I also went on reddit and saw that the Mc doesn't technically end up with any of them, technically. I hope they edit this version so that the time travel ending bs where the girls go back to be with him doesn't happen but I'm not mad about it. Seems like he didn't end up falling in love ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

Wdym they don't get in the way? There's literally chapters wasted on their POV?
Idk... maybe is just me that doesn't like the personality of either of them and got disappointed with how romance focused this is turning out to be. I thought he'd use his knowledge to survive and live on but he keeps meddling with them and whatever they'll go through as if he wasn't on a bad enough position by himself...

I feel like I would have enjoyed this story more if she became a human child rather than an adult.
-> family centric

That would be understandable since it's only been a couple of years since she came into the world. However, wouldn't their aging be different depending on the animal they are? So like a penguin matures in about 5ish years I think. I'm more confused on how she transformed and already had clothes on. ( T∀T)
With the romance came both bad art and stupid plot! Dona was more of a cousin character to the Mc. There was no romance at all until the last few chapters and they didn't have any good scenes before they got married. ╥﹏╥