As a person, I'm ecstatic for the happy ending. But as a reader, it left me with a bad taste in mouth. All the grit and tension building up throughout the two volumes, only to end up with this? It is rather anticlimactic, the intensity and anticipation I was feeling every chapter; gone without a trace in that last chapter. It felt like I was witnessing a different story.
How so?? Was it because they were seperated for so long?
The symbolism and the background of the mc, his parents story. The small tidbits of flashbacks from the past, the conflict, rendezvous and interconnection with the demonic entity. How he struggled with the relationship w the ml, and his self sacrifice; the sex w a rando just to push the him away in order to protect him. Everything was building up on the eventual climax, how is he saving him— them. How is he gonna liberate themselves from the inescapable 'curse' that has haunted not just them, but also the generation before them, the mcs parents. The whole plot was simply thrown out of the window in that last chapter. Practically, disregarded and omitted. His demon suddenly went non existent? Ml suddenly leaving w no indication and just leaving a single note? The whole characterization of the ml was essentially, stubborn, unwilling and even obsessive. He left just like that, a severe mischaracterization. There's so much more but I'm gonna put a halt. It's like the author suddenly lost all the drive, just passed any shit before hitting the deadline. Im severely disappointed, w his other work already being a classic, at least according to my acumen. This becoming a book that is just good, one that makes you feel good but shelved forever and maybe forgotten in the passage of time. Not, that one would seem to reread, to relive the sheer experience of the ride.
i feel like a lot of the things that you criticized have an explanation. kei’s demon didn’t just suddenly cease, the point was he was never a demon in the first place, and instead his childhood guild and repressed memories that he was never able to process properly. once he uncovered those, he was able to finally let go of what was haunting him the whole time. as for youichi leaving, i feel like he HAD to in order for kei to proceed with his plan to expose the president. youichi knew that kei wanted to protect him so he left so kei wouldn’t hold back anymore. he was able to go through with fighting back without any fear that youichi would get hurt. definitely not out of character and instead shows character development for them.
Man wtf, I didn't expect one bit of everything here. Judging from the name alone, I thought it was ur average, run of the mill smut yaoi. Wow, I've been reading for so long, and for so much. It's been so long since I last felt this way. Words cant describe how good this was.
I always had a type; one thing that has been constant in my life. And has never changed. Cant believe i will even say this but man, I want a man like that
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Chapter 71; they alr can't get enough of each other. They are pinning and sucking the soul out of each other in a public place. The total shift, I love everything about this manhwa
THANK U FOR THIS
Oh i cannot wait
what was Amane's exact past? I've read this so long ago, I don't remember
help i also cannot remember completely but basically his mom was super fucked up ??????? and he’s been working as a prosti since he was young until he got sort of saved/escaped.
I might be wrong bc i don’t remember but i’m pretty sure we never got a actual detailed background on what happened just kinda really short flashbacks from Amanes nightmares or when he recalls it all we know is he used to be a prostitute and his mum was abusive and neglectful
I've read this so many times but the ch.6 ending never failed to make my stomach and heart turn. The subtleness, the symbolism, the impact.
Just like a reading a good book for the first time. This will always have a place in my heart
story so well written i was damn tearing up every chapter. Everything is already unfolding, their fate is crystal clear. These people don’t deserve any of this, them and those generations of ruined people. Only thing im wishing for is a damn good payback and it better be devilish as what they make out
it’s great that people are becoming aware of rape and its damage, but just because u guys dont understand shit, everything U dont like should be labeled as rape.
Seme was in rut, he was literally out of his mind. 2 pages ago, it was clearly illustrated how seme was madly inlove with the uke and u think he would like to assault some rando?? Just because he was the “penetrator” he’s automatically the suspect and the other a victim.
Men can be raped by women as well
Just because he was the one to put his dick in(the guy in the story didnt), doesnt automatically mean he wanted to intentionally rape the guy.
Rape awareness is great all in all, but the “awareness” yall like to spout can be damaging to the actual victims.
Both seme and the other guy clearly didnt want anything to happen. It was just an amalgamation of bad luck, place, and time.
Neither of them wanted “it” to happen. No one was a suspect, both were victims. No one was “raped”:)
this site is unfortunately ridden w kids that shouldnt be reading explicit contents.
Media literacy has completely left the corona kids, rly sad generation.
Chirping about the latest buzzwords they learned rape and toxicity.
Seems like you are so desperate to defend someone who forced someone to become an omega and raped them I'll remind you just because he didn't want to rape that omega doesn't mean it didn't happen do you think saying to this omega oh but he couldn't control it makes him feel any less like he was raped he ran away cried and yet was caught and raped against his will using oh he couldn't control it to invalidate the omega is actually disgusting please seek help
Says the bitch who joined in 2019 right at the start of convos lol anywho Lindy look up the real definition of rape and toxic cause of you don't think that alpha is toxic then damn bitch seek immediate help
Your the freak that will see an omegaverse where an omega goes into heat and is brutally gangraped by a bunch of alphas after running crying screaming begging and will say well they are both the victim here since the alphas were affected by his smell and couldn't control themselves look into yourself if you don't see how that is wrong
Yeah blocking me because u couldn’t argue, and just kept speculating based on ur so called morals
Yeah the omega may have felt “raped” but it shouldn’t obscure the fact that it wasn’t rape in definition. People can feel hurt and feel victimized but the definition shouldn’t accommodate a false truth just because they feel so
People can be made to feel sad or alone, but they shouldn’t think so because they think they are victimized. Feelings as it is, is indeterminate.
Feeling like shit because u were made to feel like shit is a fact
But feeling like shit because u think they made u feel like shit should be ascertained
The omega was valid in feeling victimized and violated, but he shouldn’t think that he did because as the facts laid out, the seme never intentionally raped the omega. He never wanted to rape a rando he just met. He unintentionally went into a rut
ur vocabulary clearly indicates the generation u r in, choosing to ignore the facts and changing the definition of rape just because you think so. Yeah the law should never be handled by the likes of you.
I think we shouldn't project our morals on an omegaverse story at all because the world setting is just completely different from reality.
... at least they are learn about it.. kinda feel good to see some author and reader aware about this topic.. but hey, everybody make mistakes when they are learn.. at the end of the day this is fiction.. omegaverse is shitty even from 8 years ago… but lately its kinda good to see they improve and make some shit to make the story more interesting thoo.. but i really hate fate pair plot..
I think authors use the "rape" incidents also to accentuate the influence of pheromones. We as normal people from reality can't imagine what those pheromones would do to us but look at cats for example, female cats go into heat and attract males against their (female) own will and the male cat essentially rapes them because the female is almost never willing, Alphas and Omegas are like animals in human skin and I think you can't put normal human morals on that just like you can't with animals... Omegaverse isn't reality and you can't judge it the same way.
sorry i meant to downvote your shitty opinion.
I binged all the raw chapters. Judging from how longer and spicier the smut scenes are from one over the other ml, it's very clear who's the author's favorite
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It's the black haired guy. Not to mention, at the last chapter. After all the revelation and misunderstanding have been resolved; brown haired guy asks the uke, who he chooses from either of them. It's always the one who asks that regrets it, cue a love forlorn manhandled and maltreated uke running back from their highly strung man. Truly what makes one's heart raised and delighted. BUT, there's a chance, there is a huge possibility that we might get a poly ending. Both the leads have an equal amount of smut scenes with the uke. Which is actually rare, no, this is simply unprecedented. Assuming this is a love triangle trope. Usually the author only gives a smidge of pity sex to the 2nd ml, just enough to make the reader raise a bloodcurdling scream in the void, mourning for the death of the better lead. We might just reach for the stars with this one.
Forgot to mention, uke shows a higher degree of fondness for the brown haired guy, at least from what I saw. One can only hope
it's always the black haired guy!
Where did you read the raws?
The puppies always loses the race in the battle with the stoic and grumpy black haired MLs this is damn sad…
LOL you’re so real for this