
This is seriously messed up, its all over the place...
-There is a conspiracy in the murim world but hey, its the story of MC in a western fanstasy?
-MC stays in another world for 2 years but hey, he doesn't know anything (no magic knowledge, no geographical knowledge, no history) except for language?
-MC is played at by local magicians and messed up his already messed up life but hey, they're his greatest ally?
-MC is from another world and became a girl but hey, no one cares. Lets just treat him as an ignorant little lady that could be an instrument for apocalypse!
-MC is OP but hey, lets just keep him. We're not even curious about his background, experiences, knowledge, common sense, and mysterious techniques but were shock about what he can do. We seriously don't need to teach him about this world's common sense except for magic?
-MC is now high-ranking and he/she now have everyone's respect but hey, he/she now changed! There's no grudge, he/she just freakin lost his personality. Here we are looking for character development but it became an OP shoujo?
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Atleast write a proper and fixed villain, a proper rising OP protagonist, give a proper direction to the goddamn random side-characters, give another clear motivation and goal of the MC with his new life not just were other side-characters point him at, and write things that freakin make sense damnit!!!!
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Imagine meeting a girl like that in real life