The story is REALLY good but at the same time it still has so much potential.
I feel like if you put more time into "widening" the plot, it could be even better. Like, it misses an over-/review from another person who can just tell the author "Very good, now we just have to put more content and time into THESE incidents."
For example: foreplay. It was almost always just((...foreplay...)) - "Ok, now you are ready" - "fop-fop-fop". I missed the foreplay. Foreplay gets EVERYONE hot. Characters and readers. It's partof the sex.
The comment below me made also an example: They just solved the "I'm using you"-situation without much talk. I reeeaaally liked that they didn't make any drama, just some more communication would have been good. Or somehow make it longer? Idk.
Don't get me wrong! I really liked the story and I am pretty happy without all of this. But just with a little sprinkle here and there I believe it could be top tier.
But if he really had amnesia, we could read his thoughts, right? I won't believe anything until I hear his thoughts.
Ok, I really don't know if I want to comment in this comment section... but whatever.(￣∇￣")
1. Dear people, if you hate incest SO MUCH, why do you read it? At the beginning in the first chapter you have been warned, so I don't understand how so many people can complain now. It was YOUR choice reading it and you had the choice to stop. It's okay if you don't like it but there are people who are so please don't destroy the reading experience for them.
2. Rape. I'm also not a fan of it but unfortunately there are barely mangas /-hwas/ -huas where the consent is not dubious. I feel like it's some kind of try of tue author to get them to sleep together and the fantasy of dominance over someone (that is badly executed). If you read (smut/romance) mangas there is no way you can avoid it and I have come to accept that. But I will like comments that call it out. Even though it's just a story / fantasy it is what it is, a sexual act against your will and that's horrible.
3. Reality and mangas. Keep it apart. It's just a manga and everyone knows it's just a manga and the author probably didn't think much of it either. Not a deep story, it's basically just like porn. And if people fantasize about certain things that's not for me to judge. It's not like they want it in reality, it's just a fantasy. (And as long as it's not a crime, fine, do it in reality.)
And I can't imagine / don't get it how anyone could get the idea to try something of this, for example rape, in reality? How do young children even get to this site? Rape, murder and violence is way more prominent in movies with ACTUAL ACTORS. So I really DOUBT that chidren/teenagers confuse a manga with unrealistically drawn people with reality. They have probably so much more bad influences from TV, TikTok, Instagram and the outside world. Social media is way more toxic.
4. Incest. I mean apart from possible problems with family and getting children (which is not a problem for them), I don't see anything wrong with it. In the end it's just love. It may be disgusting love for you but for them it's just love. I can't and don't want to imagine it with my own family but if it's mutual between others, not my problem, not my business. Who am I to judge? Who are YOU to judge? I mean didn't people also think that about homosexuality? "Disgusting love" that they didn't want to imagine with themselves? Of course, this is a different situation but it is comparable. Let everyone do what they want. Just health (and maybe family) can beat them. And if it's against their will. But that's obviously always unacceptable.
5. Live your life and let others live theirs.
To all the people here in the comment section. ;)
Don't worry, your translation was totally fine! You can understand everything and that's what matters.
You missed a ¡Mierda! in one panel but I still remember what THAT mean from my last spanish class 5-6 years ago LMAO
Wow, it's so good, why aren't there more people hyping this manhwa up?
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1. Can we stop using 2nd leads as tools for the story, especially when the main lead is a jerk, and give them an actual chance? They are 2D human too!
2. Wow. The 2nd lead barely got the chance to be the seme of the 2nd couple and flippidy-flop, author makes him asshole top.
I think I forgot 3.
Well... I'll just think of something. That's not hard. Real flaccid actually. Lmao, I'm sorry.
3. Ukes are weak when it comes to endurance. Why? Strong when it comes to choosing jerks. Lol. But whyyyy. And the jerks are so jerky that they don't even respect their partner and leave without a word or cleaning up.
They are not even the type of jerks when you realize it later "Aaah, that was actually VERY rude, he was such a jerk. How could I not notice that?"
You immediately notice, because they were not nice at all.
4. And it's not the uke's fault for provoking the seme. Being nice should not be extraordinary. It's called manners not magic.
Idk if this sounds super flamy angry but it was actually pretty fun. I mean what can you expect after the 1st couple... ╮(￣▽￣)╭
(oh wow, I'm petty)
I think the story is petty u.u
No charm, all cliches, even second couple u.u
Finally he has a place to feel safe
Am happy for him