I really have to say I LOVE the way Yohan is totally whipped for MC, but doesn't really let him notice, and knows completely what's going on with MC and bully asshole. And at the same time he is not really a good guy either.
I know the You-are-in-love-with-another-guy-but-the-right-guy-was-actually-always-next-to-you-TROPE but not with a slightly twisted ML.
Does someone know similiar stories?
10/10
I love the story
I love MCs thoughts
And it has smut
Thumbs up in the butt
It's a very cute story, but it kind of rubbs me in the wrong way?
1. Calling him a "Daddy": Yes, it's just a word for older guys who can take care of you, but I don't want that connection in my head.
2. The ML being a lot in his cafe without knowing if he is actually bothering him. He is an old man who gave a guy half his age (or at least ten years younger) his number. Guy doesn't contact him. Old man shows up in cafe. Offers him anal orgasms.
A little bit more shame or self consciousness would have been nicer to read.
If someone that age can't pull someone his own age, run, because he is just using the innocence and inexperience of a young person. And if he doesn't pull away, when he notices "Oh, that guy doesn't want me", even worse. Don't be creepy, mister.
3. The ML saying he likes boyish looking guys and his butt is so smooth (basically like a child).
4. The obsession with the virginity. "I took your virginity". And the following "I come to like that" - MISTER, WHAT? I don't know why, but I hate that sentence so much. Especially between such an old man and basically a boy just out of high school.
5. He was totally not hesitant to do it with a man a lot younger than him. And if that's the case they don't want you ALTHOUGH you are young, but BECAUSE you are so young.
There was this office story where ML and MC also had a big age gap but I liked how the ML was hesitant about it. The story was slower and well thought through.
The whole taking-a-young-boys-virginity just seems like a fetish and I guess that's what rubbs me the wrong way? Because it was a fine story, not rapey and you could actually take it a little serious (not like with a lot of other stories which have similar red flags but obviously cant't be taken serious because it's just porn). But the whole fetish gave this cute story a little "predatory" vibe.
Aww, I hoped the Sunbae would slowly realize that he really can't satisfy the Uke. Not possible anymore if he gets manipulated. :(
I am coming back to this when I can skip the rape.
The Uke is VERY selfish, Seme forgave him too soon and we didn't even see him change or have sex. I am a little disappointed.
I have a question:
What exactöy is a bondage partner (or bonded partner)? Does that mean he slept with the other guide when he was his bonded partner? Was he even his bonded partner? Translation said "not anymore", so I guess yes?
Honestly, only the side chapters are readable to me, the rest is just him being raped ╥ o ╥
At first I thought "Finally a healthy BDSM story!"
And now it gets worse and worse (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
That was a 180 degree turn personalitywise. I mean better than before but realistically this is extremely unlikely to happen. People don't change that fast. Especially not a narcissist like him.
From the first chapter on I hated the 1.ML.
And I NEVER jumped ship so fast (well, i guess I wasn't even on the first one) when I saw the 2.ML.
1.ML is the biggest red flag.
Ummmm, I don't think this is the right time to have sex, you stupid idiot
hi (: