
The pacing and the events in this webtoon feel kinda random and all over the place. I don't have problems with stories that go back and forth, those stories also have some sort of continuity in a way. But LJ just springs in sth new and completely out of left field which leaves me feeling like some panels or a chapter is missing.

This is great so far. I hope the storyline won't drop off in terms of quality once Yoohan gets himself established or once the seme gets his hooks into our protagonist. I'm invested in his character and it'd be most satisfying to see him take his revenge. I'd like to see the uke for once not fall into the obvious traps of some manipulative fuck and keep his eyes on the prize.

Might be spoilers though I don't consider it to be so:
I went through the raws, I don't understand chinese but I surmised that nothing happened between big bro and Nan Nan, if anything Xin Yang and Nan Nan grew a lot closer and it seemed like they confirmed their feelings for each other long ago. The big brother seemed to tutor or listen to what's going on in their lives and they all had a good relationship. I think Xin Yang grew more attached and a bit jelly and they also kissed. I think that's what Nan Nan is referring to in the last panel of this chapter.
Yoo I swear I read this chapter a while back