Even though the first chapter wrapped up so well that it didn't feel it even needed another, i like this. It shows more into the struggles of falling in love with someone and not seeing them for ages and having to mentally catch up, and how not seeing a love in the present tense can be painful. And again it wraps it up nicely where it feels it doesn't need more, but wouldn't seem like it would hurt if there was more.
o.o' adorable. He needed help expressing himself so he used the love letter. And now our main in this chapter can walk though the gates and say "what? They said they love me and ran off. I am flattered and I wonder what I should do next. Also what are you still doing here?"
Hmm, this might be a turning point for Yule's character. These flashes as someone he says is his love has their life on the line. Though the question stands in my mind, what if Yule decides to walk away from the situation. Not kill himself, nor move to make Our main his. How would Dong respond then? Dong is not looking good in these last two chapters. then again when does someone with a knife ready to kill or telling someone to kill themselves look good. All the while our main says nothing. He doesn't tell either them anything at all he just stands there like he will accept the knife or the suicide. So he isn't looking all that great. I mean one line could change that, just one. he could say "Are you fu.....ing kidding me?" and we could see that he isn't down with this plan even though he sees no way out. Or "Why did it turn out like this?" something to show he isn't okay with the situation.
Same idea...hopefully this will be a turning point for Yule to change everything
wow, handling things a bit wrong. He could easily have said "Sometimes it's easier to talk to someone who isn't family about certain things. Nothing bad is coming out of this." and I am surprised he didn't say it like "I'm in love with you asshole. Somedays I wonder why!" and storm off. Then again he's not me.
the one guy looks like a bodyguard and seems to be dressed in semi modern clothes. Horus is not and is egotistical and I love his hair. Set me up on a blind date with him so I can touch his hair. (kinda curious if it's silky or not.)
summon the king of fire spirits, get a boyfriend! lol. This is cute. Though the fact he killed himself for a guy he only known for like a day is a bit extreme. When he was going to summon him again and it called for a greater sacrifice I thought he was going to be smart and just lop off a finger. Nope, the idiot slits his wrist and dies. Another part of me thought "maybe circa is really an elemental spirit himself but put into a new form by his father and that is why bismuth's flames don't burn him." I like this but I also wanted it expanded.
I think getting said Fire Elemental to give up his ass for a mere human is pretty extreme.
so our two leads are a extremes
so I am guessing the second couple is the ookami because the seme seems wolfish?
okay now I feel sorry for shorty. He thinks his sister is truly in love and is trying to make a happy relationship so she doesn't get hurt and maybe he gets a perk. While she is dating man after man after man. I thought it was weird that she didn't realize she was dating the brother of someone whom dumped her. she most likely knows.
with the toy dino, the kiss, the enjoying the fact that he got his pants 'wet' it seems Aoyue knows that our main was the one whose toy he got and is doing his best to confess to him his love. Aoyue seems to know that he is in love now. While our main has gotten jealous over his sister and even his past self. He also questions if two men can fall in love. His friend gave him crap answers. A better answer would be "If you like them and want to do not only fun normal stuff but naughty stuff too."
curious and curious. not enough to go on yet to say if I would like it. But it is curious. There is one part I don't like, but it's just a technicality or maybe a style choice. I wasn't very happy that the naughty scenes were kinda washed out looking. like in a fog. Maybe it represents what he is feeling or thinking, but without that context I am just saying that I don't like how that is done. Otherwise pretty good and I look forward to more so I can get a better grasp on if I like the story.
If its like a week of lust, then that was pretty much the preview chapter
dont worry lololol those blurry scenes were like a preview of the next chapters so we’ll definitely get what we want (๑•ㅂ•)و✧