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evil little friend. Seriously, the guy calls himself a rival but he's really like a family member. You know how family can be both love and hate you at the same time and still ya get along. I do like how our mains are debating and thinking things through. Our artist main knows our main quite well to know how he speaks in text. While our main main still has yet to have the inner talk of if he really is in love or not. he just acknowledges he keeps running away and it's hurting the person he cares about.

The clone story while touching is a touch confusing with the plot twist. I am thinking that it was the original and not a clone. That the clone figured that he might have memory loss so he could give him a taste of the same treatment. However in fear of events repeating themselves he backed off from his plan and finally decided he was going to kill himself. The unexpected but happy it happened was our main meeting the child clone. Which truthfully, this might have shown good reason for cloning. for loss of a child.

um, he's not crying cause he's sad idiot, he's crying cause it bloody hurts! He beats our main, then decides to rape him while the arse has fresh woulds that could be bloody, grabs our main's dick and tells him to get hard. Uht, dude if the uke isn't hard that means you suck at being a seme. He then ties him up another way so our main can't even wash his ass or soak it in some nice herbal water. And now he wants to make our main into his type of uke? So he is super stupid, sadistic, evil and needs his dick chopped off. Even though he says he hates his brother because his brother killed his mother. I get the feeling he wants to screw his brother instead. Why else literally screw the person his brother considers his lover? Can the next chapter have the 'boyfriend' at least stab his brother in one of the nuts?

chapter 6... the uke seems to be the sweet evil type. Yes he is a bad boy, but he is just so sweet, goofy and endearing that you can't help but be charmed like his seme. I love how he realized it was unnatural progression but yet felt like smooth progression. that made it better.

the cousin is a bit of an asshole isn't he? Now I spent a lot of time with cousins that didn't like me for a while when I was little. You know what. The one only stole from me once. And I knew it was going to happen. Since she would take my one goosebumps book and read it. She would say she was borrowing it. Never once did she claim it was her's. And what my cousins did to push me away was not let me touch anything in the house. I couldn't touch the tv, the game consoles, nothing. So yeah, bullying your cousins when you are upset they are 'taking your parent's attention away' or 'stealing all the love' or 'why are they here, they are freaks.' (yeah that is a real reason I heard my cousins said when discussing why I was there). I think it's demonizing the cousin too quickly. like I said, my cousins and I were in a similar situation, and they couldn't hit me because that would get me more attention. So they slowly made it so I could only sit on the floor and read books, and only the ones I brought.

each person in this chapter is both right and wrong in their way of thinking. I love it. Oh sensei, you are Ryota's lover so yes he wants to include you in his plans for the future. He is thinking of the future, and his thought is 'I want to be with the one I love.' not the best because passions can change, but still, if I was in love I would want to have a job where I can at least see the person I love once a day. As for Our main couple, He's not upset, he's sexually frustrated. He sees his sexy as hell love and wants to bask in their warmth, but since there is people around he can't.

.... and he doesn't question why 'big brother' kissed him and is touching him? Guess he wants him too.

wakes up to our mains, might be sneaky with his sleeping love

cute. and funny. are there others who will play a role?

New doors are opening for him in sex. He most likely never knew he liked being watched.

Also the little story by the secondary editor is funny yet a bit sad. no more dicks??