thats it?.... wow...
It's pretty rare to get a completed story like this. I think the story could've had a little more plot, but I approve of the amount of plot devices it had. I appreciate that the story didnt go on and on, and while it definitely could've ended on a stronger note, it definitely ended on a good one. If you want a quick read with all the feelz (aka you're a sucker for melodrama) then this is a story for you.
Nooo, the translator was just joking. That's not the end of this manga
The last page said “To be continued next time”. Was it not translated? (I just read it since it was there, yay Japanese, but now you know. //ded)
my response was after ch26, and yea I read ch27 and noticed the "to be continued" characters, but I dunno where the story would continue from here on, feels like alot of the drama is settled.
I think another comment said there were two more chapters, so not much left if that’s true.
this is the SECOND time i've come across a story that ends so abruptly. The other was a webcomic about a girl named Jelack.
it's unfortunate to see these stories with potential end so abruptly but maybe its best that they come to an end and maybe it'll be useful for future work.
so Im too lazy to go looking for release dates but...:
1. a warrior "father figure"
2. a priest "mother figure"
3. an elderly wizard guardian
4. he's named "Will"
.... just at a glance it says its a copy of Saihate no Paladin knock off.
(is there some explanation??? like its the same creator or.... it's the original, but sucks.... etc etc...)
I feel like the last extra turned so... meta. The assault charge seemed kinda random to pop up... but considering a side story with Sei and his bf was about an Alpha getting sex charges on him for attacking his omega friend he wanted to be paired with, it makes sense.
i think it also highlights the modern aspect of the manga's setting - where human rights for omegas exist. I don't think it is out of place - rather it's a beautiful way to remind us of the time zone [that was mentioned from the start]
MAKE SURE YOU SUE HIS ASS AND RUIN HIM LAWYER-KUN
I didnt think it was out of place... but it felt more of a slight after thought. Like I was thinking she would've gotten advice from him how to be a more powerful or commanding person as an Omega.... and maybe he would be the one to suggest a lawsuit, rather than her outright suggesting it. Even in Law and Order shows, victims are reluctant to face their abuser.
I feel like im gonna explode if I see another notice about an upcoming comic.... with no chapter.
Honestly I was confused with the favorability system when they introduced the second brother and how he reacted even with a negative favorability score. He seemed like he cared but due to the choices he got fed up. You realize why he was in the negatives later, but he felt more agitated in the positives than he was when they first met. I'd go as far as saying the whole house's treatment of the character was very up and down. the maid that turns a new leaf so rapidly.. and the butler who didnt appear aggressive, just rude suddenly became subservient after a tongue lashing... then the brother and father who just wanted to be noticed as relatives... (the whole... she called me "father/brother" cliche etc etc...)
right…. the plot and character change is so rushed and contradicting it gives whiplash
I DO like how the story isn't bogged down with random isekai powers that kinda dominate the story for no reason. The plot actually tries to tie into the girls (potentially) former life. Assuming this is an isekai, most stories would mention the main character got hit by a bus...died in some rush job and then just never mentions it ever again. Also... I guess even tho i griped about the whiplash, I think overall I don't mind it... because I suppose the alternative would've been a long boring story about characters we barely need to know about. (but it would totally be better if we got to see other POVs so the whiplash isn't as extreme)
indulging into side characters perspective would add definite explanations and flavor into the story but the issue with side character stories is they try to use it as a way to create a sob story and use that to rush into immediate forgiveness and transition into a romantic plot
These chins are turning into typical yaoi "diamond cutting" chins. Did I miss the large yaoi hands somewhere too?
plot is pretty interesting but, honestly feels like 2 different stories going at the same time. it's kinda of interesting that what should be the main story feels like a side story and vice versa.