They fr blaming Ai for breaking this man. They were literally both teens and he was clinging to her foolishly for emotional support which honestly wasn’t her responsibility. He was bitter and selfishly killed her knowing she was a mother. Her breaking up with him isn’t an excuse for his actions or for breaking him.
I honestly can’t believe I wasted so much emotional effort and time on this story. Like I genuinely thought after getting all those comments she would have changed the ending, hell I’d rather chapter 9 be the ending rather than 10. After all that she really decided to stay with Rose instead of literally just going back home, and no happy ending for Anna? The problem with short stories from this author is that she clearly doesn’t know how to develop anything. If this story was dragged out with Lily redemption arc it honestly proably would’ve been better.
This is like a 1-2.5 star rating honestly. I better not see any rose stans in the comments after she literally fucked up this girl relationship and perception of love just to isolate her and then not even be loyal to her.
She went from saying “In case this isn’t actually love” to saying “In case this is love. Say what you want about Rose but she has perfected her manipulation tactics. Instead of giving Lily a choice and asking if she wanted to go home or stay with her she brings up a “sob story” and guilt trips her. Which effectively makes the choice between Rose or Anna. Lily if you think about another woman during sex you’re not in love with the one your fucking I have way too much hope in you but please choose Lily while you have the chance.(Ik I’m coping mad hard)





I’m genuinely sorry for what he has been through when he was a kid, but I cannot feel sorry for this man. He gave out the mother of his kids address to a strange man “not thinking he would kill her” because he wanted to scare her? Bro endangered his entire family cuz she dumped him. Then had the audacity to say Ai was like everyone else.
From the start I’ve always felt so strongly upset for Ai who died so tragically and young and it feels like a slap in the face that her killer is getting any sympathy. I really hope she ends up being reincarnated or smth.