I enjoyed reading it and watching the style improve overtime!
However, Yeonsoo, my dear...he created his own problems sometimes. When he jumped to conclusions without communicating, I'd just face palm.
Keith irritated in the beginning as well with his random mood swings.
They're perfect for each other.
This was very steamy.
I think the difference between before (when he pushed it in with his fingers) and now is that he actually hit "the spot" and J (I forgot the bottoms' name) can actually feel it.
I get why he is trying to refrain from putting a label on what they have, but he himself is actively breaking his rules and unconsciously getting attached. I don't know what he needs to make him realize this but hopefully he figures it out soon before someone starts calling him "Daddy".
Now, I came from a story where the freak was mutual and somewhat functional. Perhaps very functional.
This is NOT that. I cringed a lot at the earlier behaviors and felt indifferent when he was caught. I see Killing Stalking in this, but I feel like it'll be less murder and more dominance. I'll stick around to see.









My brain never seems to turn on when i read this.
Perhaps, that's good.
I honestly want to see how it ends.