
putting aside the whole loop thing. God this is such a depressing relationship. Mc’s hyung is such a piece of shit with the biggest case of internalized homophobia and the mc obviously has his own issues too but seeing their dynamic just made me depressed asf cuz of how surprisingly realistic it is. I wanted the mc to meet someone better (ideally therapy but yknow that doesn’t exist in BL) and move on with his life so the blue haired guy will realize his fuck ups.

This was so incredible bad omg im sorry but the story was clearly not well thought out or planned properly. There are so many that don’t make sense or were half assed. The whole premise was supposed to be about s&m and yet we haven’t witnessed a single play except for some bad roleplays? The author kept shifting the focus from one thing to another during the story and it just made it look like a shitshow
I wanna cook this art and eat it with a vanilla ice cream scoop on top
Real shit