The ending seemed a bit rushed...and too easy, but hey it's a oneshot. Not bad for a oneshot :)
This was actually good. It was a bit sad...bittersweet...loved it though!
I really really like this!! There were sad parts, but *sigh* It was just beautiful! I really like Ryan :D
It's cute, but too short ;) hehe :D Thanks for posting it!
It seemed to end before it really got started :P it would have made an interesting series though! :)
Yeah, it has potential, its a shame that they dont ise it(〜￣△￣)〜
okay that was cute, but sad too. awwww poor them! They would have made a cute couple! :)
No feeling in it??
hmmmmmm I think there is. I guess it just depends on what you mean by that. I really liked it! :)