“He never even responded to my short letter (from 2 years ago mind you) he never even showed me any sincerity so how could his love and devotion be true” and then later she says “why did he care for me so much” yeah the problem with this is the writing that makes noooo sense whatsoever realistically a woman would not ever act like this irl over a letter that she never asked him about or say no sincerity was shown then later ask why he cared for her so much. This is why it’s envoking so much anger from me whoever wrote this, REWRITE IT. Her acting shocked and crying after treating him like absolute garbage and wearing his heart around her neck oh I’m SICKKKKKKK. WHO WROTE THIS????
Oh I’m FUMING literally crying real tears right now, her and her brother are selfish. I can already tell he gave her his heart for her to live (at her brothers request mind you, which is insane cause you already got his moms heart) bro died for a woman who ignored him for 2 years. I understand she felt deceived by him, but holding a grudge for 2 years? Children aren’t even that petty. You didn’t have to love him but you could’ve remained cordial not spew hate for 2 years, especially since he’s never been rude or anything. Bro made one mistake and you held it against him without even trying to learn more about the situation like… I’m ANNOYED. I’m always a fl fan but WOW Im hoping she has some major redemption arc cause this is BAD petty childish selfish immature. I guess really I should be upset at the author for writing it this way though .
She had every right to be upset at him at first , but holding that grudge and living miserably for 2 years to that kind man without ever trying to figure things out for yourself ? Get out my face. And YOU ML, stand up for yourself?? I know the emperor had something to do with this whole thing but come AWN , you should’ve either communicated with her or given her back the same energy. You should not have given up your heart for a woman who did nothing for you, ever. You could’ve continued to provide care for her cause yes that’s your wife and she had to leave her home for you, but at the cost of your life?? Oh everybodyyyyyyyy making me mad. Chile lemme keep reading and hopefully calm down. I need major redemption arc .
Oh my gosh she’s pathetic..I already know she’s gonna turn back time to fix it but WOW. She was straight up an unreasonable loser , I’ve never bashed a fl like this before
Please tell me she gets better, because it’s plain as day that the emperor is using him. That crash out was so uncalled for, how bout talk to first crash out later .
Ch 6 is TICKLING me cause , bro was gagged by hiw responsive she is and she has never felt like that before either these 2 are super sexually compatible or the other guy SUCKS and doesn’t know a woman’s body. I vote a mixture of both.
10/10. Spectacular story spectacular characters spectacular children. I’m so pleased
I know she loves her comfort but Noah all dressed up and in a dress is just STUNNING.
I think Roxant is the cutest ml to ever ml.. watching him being all sleepy and cuddly with Leah babying him.. this is my type. A calm giant teddy bear
After re reading, the complaints make literally n9 sense. The story was well rounded , the fl and ml were great , pacing was good, plot interesting, and their children? Gorgeous. I only wish we got to know more about their kids
I'd have to disagree as someone who just finished binge reading the whole thing. there were a lot of plot points that felt empty or unfinished that made rhe pacing feel rigid. it was honestly a little hard to get rlly attached to any of the characters except felix and leraje/lerry because none of them feel truly fleshed out. the art is beautiful and the overall story had a lot of potential but the execution is what I have a problem with- it just feels a little lifeless imo, but everyone's got their own opinions
I want her to break his heart REALLYYYYY bad. Also I hate the chat gpt thing… why are we encouraging the usage of AI
havent read this but AI is in it?
The fl uses it to help her , like ai is an actual character. I don’t know if the actual artist used ai as a drawing tool though