I love coming back to this and reread it again and again. the comedy is on point. the character development and growth is really well written. their relationship is adorable. and the sex is always fun ahah.
the way the story is developing is ,,, weird? rushed and too predictable (in bad ways).
which is a shame,, cause i really thought i would enjoy this...
the couple is weird, the way they get together is weird, they're supposed feelings are weird?? and the communication is ??? the kid is fine (bit too obsessed with calling everyone daddy but,, it's a kid,,).
there's no real emotion, nor in the characters, nor in the story itself? it's weird!
it just looks like the author mashed a bunch of tropes and ideas together and didn't think more about it.
AND TO TOP IT ALL. (besides all the other weird shit going on) THERE'S A "LOVELY" SEX SCENE RIGHT AFTER A RAPE SCENE??? (WHY IS THE OMEGA NOT FUCKING TRAUMATIZED AFTER BEING ASSAULTED MULTIPLE TIMES WTF? //oh. seems like not even the family cares,,,,, okay then i think I'm done.)
stopped in the middle of chapter 36.
Same! Stopped at ch 36 too lol
The beginning was okay, until it wasn't ╮(￣▽￣)╭
so beautiful. amazing how even after all that, i still wanted there to be more.
(oh! there's a new volume let's gooo)
like- actually perfection. I love reading and rereading this one. everything about it is so good.
I read this while it was ongoing and I remember being really into it. then suddenly it was over. but it was still a yes for me.
had a lot of potential. and was really funny in some parts. but that's about it. even if I don't touch on the lack of consent (since the first chapter) and the sex sequence (which was way too fast and way too uncomfortable to read),, I was hoping to see more of stuff like, Tomoru's work life, how he got there, what he intends to work on next, etc. would also like for Ritsu to be a more developed character, cause we know near nothing about him.
(note: ends on chapter 80,, the other two are just flashbacks (to chapter 62 I think) it's better to read them at that time).
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS ONE SO MUCH. MADE ME CRY, GIGGLE AND QUESTION EVERYTHING ahahshs
I know they're fictional,, but I wish them the best
hm,, if you can't make a short story feel complete,, then don't?? add more chapters or don't add stuff that'll never get explained or explored??
extremely adorable. just portrays a first crush and the desire to grow up. it's just so precious to me.