i’m sorry but i can only laugh when reading ts, the dialogue deadass feels so unnatural at times/silly because it feels like they’re going out their way to emphasize the toxicity of the seme when they don’t need to:
like i’ll just be reading a line of dialogue and immediately go “???” after processing it.
you wouldn’t even have to change a single detail in the image drawn, JUST tweak the line a bit to not sound toxic and it would make this sm more refreshing, normal, and not werid asf— like atp i’m just wondering “why?” like he didn’t even pursue him in a crazy toxic way, they just had a bad misunderstanding. but now that they’re together it just feels like they’re making him way “worse” even though he was technically always like this.
point being i genuinely don’t remember it being this drastic imo. it rlly just needs some toning down ngl
i just rlly don’t like that there wasn’t a stronger reaction to the fact he was getting prostituted out by his sister and that he felt obligated to please her, implying coercion, implying non-consensual actions… like what happened?
this was def rushed, which is disappointing but oh well…
wow he looks fine asf passed out, the hair flowing down and the back arched asf??! mhmmm, now that’s what i’m talking about
no shade some of yall r doing too much over an EXTRA.
it’s not suppose to be an actual arc nor a fleshed out volume, it’s simply extra content to an already existing volume, so i’m not understanding the rushed comments and shit
Being so serious, I’m not moved (emotionally)… I feel like Glen is suppose to be character I should care about more, but I don’t.
His death just leaves a bad taste in my mouth, it feels like a weird plot device/set-up for the romantic progression (don’t have to agree to this, but in this moment this is how I feel). I’m just not fucking with how this situation even progressed, like Ross pulling up and causing all of this BS dead feels random/unserious, because the stakes of the situation don’t seem that high despite all that transpired (cuz yk a man literally died).
Anyways, as the story went on it just feels like his character became detached from moving the plot and more so on moving Shin’s character. Like… I feel bad, but not because he died but because of how it affected Shin, yk? Even just as I was reading some of the comments online and shit, the reaction to his death has been very Shin-focused… which makes sense cause, yk, they’re siblings and this is the freaking main character’s family! But like I wish I was more sad/disappointed because his character is now gone and not because of how sad the situation is in Shin losing basically his only family member.
Really, a part of me feels like the author wasted him, but at the same time didn’t because of the things stated above. It’s an unfortunate situstion but oh well, the story will continue. rip.
all that because you’re bitter about a past relationship, i’m sorry but i laughed because atp we have to move on
like hating the individual that cheated on you? yes forever, plz do that.
hating everyone that belongs to the gender of the individual that cheated on you? grow tf up
that just felt random lmao, i’m gonna pretend this chapter doesn’t exist cuz it truly didn’t move the plot imo
i’m starting to realize bls straight up follow trends.
there was the whole squiring trend (with bottoms), then we entered that weird phase of like dark/black flag tops & authors “compensating” readers by making it over the top smutty, and now we’re entering the tops squirting phase.
there r some more that i caught onto but i can’t remember them rn
i’m sorry but elsa’s maternal side obviously being some sort of blend of east asian (china specifically) or at least influenced by it and then having blonde hair and blue ass eyes is killing me like oh??
i don’t have words to describe how incompetent, useless, stupid, irresponsible, and idiotic the king is… just lots and lots of curse words. what a big loser
and he was old ASF getting with who even knows how young Tiliah(?) was… sigh let me rest for now.
his head must be for decoration because his actions do not match his thoughts
i rlly do think this story is nice and cute but i just don’t get why they’re pushing the “romance”/the ML’s interest in her so early into the story.
And it’s not like this trope is unique & hasn’t been done in other manhwas, but something about this one just feels iffy. And I mean in the sense it feels forced, like they’re doing it for the sake of doing it. I genuinely do not think their bond so far has been written that well.
It’s not bad by any means but it feels so empty— seeing the ML blush over her, having a special interest in her, wanting to be around her frequently, pushing this idea of him wanting to monopolize & spoil her— it all just feels stupid to me. Like i rlly just wish their bond felt more natural, bc rn it’s screaming inorganic to me.
I’ll still read because I find the family to be cute somewhat but the “romance” is genuinely ruining it for me so far.
just discovered that their adult selves this entire time has been the present timeline not their high school/middle school past.
lord knows i need to do a re-read soon
no shade but is this giving adult and minor? like can we get an age difference plz (and if i missed it plz someone inform me) cuz if so idk if i’ll continue to read but it seems cute
so father-son relationship, objectifies uke and refers to him as a hole, and threatens to chop off his limbs only to make use of his body/hiding ability?
dpmo.
hmm the author taking the opportunity to have the BOTH the bottom tease the tops, i just know their next series has insane potential to include some devious switch.
also yall im not seeing the twinkification yall… a different sort of art style, yes. but straight up TWINKIFIED??? naur