
The second couple is better cause they’re so real, idk I kinda like the dynamic between them I kinda like the boss guy cause I relate to him in a way (definitely not the asshole writing thing he does) also the white boy is just sweet and chill I like him he’s real
also idk if it’s just me but like my biggest ick is when there’s a pretty big age gap but they meet as adults then they turn it to where they’ve known each other as kids like bro idk my ick though
the story is really wonky especially for the main couple, but the second couple it’s pretty good pacing but I hope it gets better

THIS IS PEAK

and one thing I loved was that yoon was some fragile petite dude, yea he was weak but he still pushed and pushed and pushed he still wanted to recover but he did it in a harmful way, also kang was good but not really fleshed out as I hope it was, I think yoon was definitely the best in terms of writing he is MC after all.
Kang was supposed to be edgy yaoi guy who like pretended to be mean but loved yoon. I’m glad the author made him conservative yet open, like I said not really fleshed out but he’s definetly way better written compared to BL’s who try to focus on plot but end up giving in on sex scenes and what not

If I had to critique this or have one issue with it it'd be Yoons recovery after he got out if his coma, like realistically he'd have to rube speaking, eating, walking, he'd have to relearn some basic things all over again, he'd have mood swings and his appetite would be all over the place, he'd be very skinny and very pale but eh yk
BRAH I WAS CLENCHING MY CHEEKS WHEN BE WAS WALKING IVERRR FUCCJKKKKKK
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