It's a nice story though it lacks some kind of appeal that makes the reader sympathize and be able to feel the female character's feeling regarding the cheating incident, the sudden realization of his feelings for Toda (hope i'm not mistaken) and the confession. It's like everything of those were just briefly expressed, though it is understandable since it is said that the Mangaka is a rookie and maybe first time having a manga she made published. There's a lot of potential for improvement and through experience I know that soon she'll be able to make our hearts clench inside our chest, tears to flow in our eyes and heart flutter at the sweetest moments. ^U^ Good luck to the Mangaka, will look forward to her next Manga ~~
When ever I see Shinkai especially the close-up or the drawings where his face is clearly seen, I would stop and stare at it for at least a minute before continuing, sometimes I would even go back to look at it once more~!!!! He have this kind of a kid face but the aura around him shouts "I'm a man!!! A manly man" I can't get enough of him at all.(≧∀≦)
That is just the best! I started giggling and my husband looked over at me. I just said "comments"... (⌒▽⌒)
Doh!!! He made me read your comment out loud! LOL!!!
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That was what I had been feeling the whole time I was reading it~!!!!
You said it perfectly! Spot on! I got the same feeling but never could describe it!!!
Hehehe~
He just simply gives off a really manly charisma despite having a kid like face and a smaller height than his uke. It makes him stand out even more.
Sooo YUM!!!!
Hhahahaa ahI find it funny how the girl relates every little thing to tentacles TWT hehehehe despite having some exposed drawing, it was a good laugh.