
From a short yaoi i dont expect much character dev. but you gotta show a complete scene bro.. He meets his fated pair, drinks coffee, realizes his love for bf, leaves, gets fever, gets pregnant and suddenly the guy comes back from abroad and sees his boyfriend with his fated pair at an unknown place which i think is an airport? How did they meet again, why is the guy there of all places, why did the guy came back when he just got a divorce case..
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The one thing i loved about it was the way they actually talked about things... To create a sad factor, authors create misunderstandings between them and many time they dont even talk about that stuff.. Its simply ends with sex.. And the loud part was really good... Its a good turn on bro..
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From a short yaoi i dont expect much character dev. but you gotta show a complete scene bro.. He meets his fated pair, drinks coffee, realizes his love for bf, leaves, gets fever, gets pregnant and suddenly the guy comes back from abroad and sees his boyfriend with his fated pair at an unknown place which i think is an airport? How did they meet again, why is the guy there of all places, why did the guy came back when he just got a divorce case.. So many questions bro..
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Hahahaaha after reading your comment that I realize your point is actually true hahaha