
Reading this again I have mixed feelings.the story ended good and all, but I just find it strange that Ash thought they were just sex buddies, when he would send mixed signals to Lyle making him think they might be more than that.But then again Lyle has never been in a serious relationship b4 this.Idk how do you have warm feelings toward someone and think y’all are nothing ? Whenever I get to the middle of the story I start to feel mad at Ash. Who invites a fuck buddy to their families house? Unless your someone who plays with multiple people,and your family knows it too.

Well that’s kinda the point isn’t it? That’s why it’s called define the relationship lol
That feeling of “what are we?” That most of us feel.
Neither Ash nor Lyle are wrong for thinking they are nothing, their relationship started as business transaction and neither have said they want to be more.
Ash is someone who can separate feelings and flirting, but falls in love with Lyle so slowly he doesn’t realize until it’s seemingly too late.
Lyle fell hard and wanted to be more with Ash much quicker.
It’s a story of miscommunication, the lesson here is “If you feel it say it! Don’t be afraid!”

I don’t like how the ML, was beating on the MC during the moon festival.Yes I know most of the people there were supposed to fight to death but why would you injure him like that if you like him?
Idk I know the ML thinks MC betrayed him, but YOU DECIDED TO MARRY HIM ANYWAY!! Why treat him like this if you’re still going to be hung up on him?I do like lovers who are able to fight each other on equal ground, I’m just saying that ML is sending mixed signals.

the ml feelin like mc betrayed him is probably because mc didnt really tell ml his plan in previous life. like mans chased mc down because he was scared and worried for him and on top of that he watched mc die in his arms without bein able to help him because he had no idea what he need to do to help him
idk if this makes sense but its my insight on ml but i could be 100% wrong lol °<°

Well ML is having second thoughts on being kind to MC remember ML said that he wanted to break MC’s legs just so he can’t run anywhere and stays with ML forever? He refrained from doing that and instead marry the MC because he still is very much attracted to MC. ML’s love towards MC is borderline obsessive to the point of not caring the wishes of the other people’s feelings or opinions.
TLDR; ML felt betrayal and wanted to get revenge on MC at first but he ended up not going through it and married him instead.
I can’t believe ppl are actually trying to critique this……….
This is porn with like 10% plot….
15% if we’re generous.