Dans kinda fucking dumb ik the author is trying to come across as it being how nice of a soul he is but this is just sad. Stockholm syndromeeeeeee. If they were gonna go this route they should’ve done it differently. We need to see at least a lick of change to have hope in the story. Dan is the only one changing. The story is getting stale it’s honestly getting repetitive where’s the progress. Cmon I’m expecting more.
And progress isn’t like immediate “I love Dan omg” realization. I mean like a split second of him second guessing something or realizing he might be wrong or a spling of regret/sorry. We haven’t gotten a single one of these. I honestly don’t know if this is gonna be drawn out then happen, it’s going to be a horrible character development where he just kinda immediately snaps out of it, no development at all and we just go with the victim x crazy( which I’m beginning to think will happen because Dan fell in love with him, and ig joos getting possessive over him or will. Which is the closest thing to development in joo that we see. Which is a common route then they fall and love and are like what the frog why am I having these emotions omg ahwjwjrneisksj but will joo be like that? Idk. Prolly not. Mf is content on owning his hole) , or it’s gonna actually start soon hopefully. Why do I have hope in this? I don’t. It’s just this is made by a reputable source and I’m wanting to see where it goes. I’ve already lowered my rating twice, just anger every chapter. do your readers good, not impressed so far.
Dan you need to find a plastic bag on the side of the road, take a shit in it, place it in fucker joos room under his pillow, rank the heat up to max, and put a little bow on the door… that’s just the first gift though, the real surprise is the coal burner you left running the whole day. When he goes in his room to investigate lock him in there. The poo smell will mask the burning scent. Make sure to glue the windows shut! Maybe he’ll lie in the bed, smush the first gift on his head, then wait for his demise. Every breath is poison, you cough wanting fresh air but all you get is death. No salvation. But you gotta make sure to revive him so you can torture him which I’m too lazy to come with I never intended to write more than two sentences in this comment wtf my head hurts so bad maybe I’m dying fuck this joo guy
That motherfucker better be adopted or like step sibling or some shit Cause I like this plot and want to enjoy this. Like another comment said she can’t remember her childhood so yeah that’s probably (hopefully) the twist. Whyd they have to have a sibling plot like why not her personal knight or close childhood friend they always gotta do something weird on a good story. Imma still read this though regardless, these odd plots will never relinquish my enjoyment and obsession to read.








This is so funny poor lad haha