
I noticed that mc alway put his hand in his pocket when he walk, like trying to be cool or something lol. It look very cringe, and idk why but his behavior is just cringe. Maybe the author make his behavior come out a little to strong when trying to make a cool characters or interesting characters. The plot is good, tho.

So who does Carsen actually in love with? Og Maythan or Mc Maythan, because rn they in the same body so it can be confusing and understandable if Carsen doesn't know. Idk, how to feel this but I have mix feelings since both Maythan are likeable. But in honest, og Maythan feel more like a friend to Carsen, while mc May than feel more like the lover.

Omg, when ml is a baby, he is so cute. Although, the way they draw the head seen so big.To bad, the environment he grow up to probably make him a rapists. I didn't understand what it is saying, but I still don't get how he is half zombie and half human, same goes to his mom too i think. Also, I think mc could have got away from all those suffer if only he have not goes to go look for that little twigs. Can't believe he done that, little twigs is gonna be an annoying character. (-.-)

This is good, in most of the martial art story the mc is mostly handsome only. Here, he is so cute like a baby lol. Usually I don't like romance, and the girl was not that much of a self center. At least she is honest with him and support him unlike many other girl who is kind of mean to mc only and only put their expectations to mc to be qualified. Also, it is only right for her to at least to get to know a boy and not just married into a boy out of nowhere. So she okay. I just hope it is not harems, that all. Mc may like her, but I like how he more focus on his pet and poison, not the girl in romance.

This is pretty interesting but can sometimes be confusing a little. Especially the part when all of a sudden something happens, I can't tell if it is a flashback, a dream, or if it is happening. For example, like in Chapter 16, on the last panel, that looks like a dream or flashbacks.
On the other hand, the way they talk sound like a cult, which seem kind of funny when they flirt and confession to each other.
Mc is an honest and straightforward person which is nice, and I like how he strong.
Overall, I just hope everything goes well for mc and ml.
I can smell the angst, I will just wait until it is completed and the read the last chapter