
Every chapter is nothing but misery and pain. This could end now and I would feel nothing but contempt. jooin suffered in the beginning, but I've sat through all the suffering and now the victim has become the villain. It's obvious what the writer is trying to do, but it's completely not working. Please end this soon. I wish Cain never showed up, he deserved sooooooooo much better!

I have seen a LOT of smut, but this story's cuteness is so fluffy and then BAMM forced crying sex. It's really off putting, from the incubus to the "aunt" there are so many characters that need to disappear. Also, a butt hole is NOT a pussy!!!!! I just want to see our angels in love and their sweet baby.

I hate to complain about an author when I'm reading this for free, but these people are UNBEARABLE. Everyone is angry all the time and nothing makes sense. Why is the uke the leader if he handles everything by hitting people and yelling. This is a copy of many other stories that were all written better. At this point I don't even care what's going on with the other world, i just want to get away from these people.

I feel like if you were really paying attention you would know that he usually doesn't solve everything thing with yelling and hitting ( we saw a couple of times when he handle situations that could have gotten out of hand well) but right now he just having a mental breakdown cause he's getting fucked in his sleep and waking up with hickeys and cum all over him
I hope this ends soon. A better writer would not be dragging in this out when the outcome has been obvious since the start.
You know we all say this
But if you were given a pen do you think you could do better????
It’s just a question
No hate
No I don't, but I've never claimed to be a writer. But being a writer isn't a requirement for being able to point out bad writing. And most of the recent comments are talking about the bad writing.
Ik ik
Of course I also don’t like how the story is being dragged
Tbh I skipped a lot of panels in this chapter
But it’s the way you put the comment