I saw this on pocket comics. I think there's 18 chapters.
it said "I don't want to work" but the photo is from "I Will Become the Villain’s Poison Detector/Taster". I really thought I was reading the " I Will Become the Villain’s Poison Detector" chapter 1 again for a second there lmao. usually the pic in the mid I encounter was from the cover of the manhwa. so this really caught me off guard. now I don't know how to read this because of the distraction of that photo from "I Will Become the Villain’s Poison Detector".i guess I'll drop you for now coz my mood to read this diminish after seeing it.
I'm gonna miss you baby heechan and daddy minjaee. I'll wait for you guys to come back again. see you again my darlings. ╥﹏╥ btw. I don't know why there's an extended hiatus but I hope there's no health issue involve they've been working so hard. please take care of yourself while taking hiatus. fighting guys~
done reading up to the recent chapter. I'll rate it as 4.5/5. although I don't like the mc at the start and halfway, I can say the story was good. the ml was good to the fl through and through, the bothering part was the age gap(9yrs yrs oldxadult) but I think there's no grooming happen coz there was a nanny taking care of the fl growing up in ml estate and most of the time ml are fighting on war so they really have spent little time and know little about each other. they also do the deed when she was 20 in the past. she was already adult. I like the ml for using a contraceptive so fl won't get pregnant, not like some asshole who only think with their dick and runaway when they get someone pregnant. usually it's the female character who use the contraceptives but here I can say that he really cares for her that's why he's scared. oh well all in all it's entertaining somehow for me.
---- my rant on 1 to 50s
if the past was the present timeline and fl didn't experience those past regrets.. the fl really deserve what happen to her. on her pov it's always giving the vibes of the ml was the bad guy. when in fact it's her attitude and personality that's why it reach to that point. she took advantage the ml and still think that the ml was a bad guy. she's not really likeable in the past. from what I see the ml do her best to cater what she need and wants. she also push the ml to not get close to her. she can't also do her wife duties and stay on her room and spend money on luxury while ml doesn't receive anything from her until he die and now that she was comeback from the past now so she's have the guts to act arrogant like a noble lady so she won't get thrown away just like in the past. she's still not likeable in the present timeline. her blushy blushy face is annoying. i dont get why her regrets need to give a chance. she's selfish as fuck in the past. she's annoying. we'll atleast on this present she already have value, due to the skills she learn in the past. her past attitude was annoying
ps. we'll i guess her attitude and personality develop like that because her circumstances of getting married when she was still a child. she's underdeveloped. as I continue reading for me she develop her personality and attitude due to her nanny. she's the one who take cares of her. I feel like she spoiled her really well. also. the age gap of married is too much too in modern but I guess in this type of setting although it's unlawfully to be married at that age but their law is fine to that. for now, I can't say she deserves being reborn or not but fl still not a likeable character to me..
pps. if you see my negative comment just skip it. okay? I'm not entertaining person so I won't care much about your reply below, so I'll give you heads up to skip it than give me your time. :)
i got bored. i skimmed some chapter after mc choose the luxurious route. tbh. i was interested of her and him meeting again. the present timeline, i feel like the love of fl was so shallow. she was inlove in the past with that old guy and she have regrets of not telling her feelings and yet after coming back she get easily swayed by the handsomeness of her husband and even if she say the she doesn't love him and love someone else it will develop somehow coz she was easily swayed by his beauty. her demeanor of old woman. diminished and start again as a teenage adult person mindset.. even her thinking dropped down as an old woman who experience hardship of war. she already experience the war and yet here she was building of some business and busy trying to pull some divorce..jeez. what an annoying plot. im more of interested when they are old partner in the past coz there's no luxurious involved but simplicity but the present timeline is so annoying so cliche.
she already knows that she was in the novel and knows whats gonna happen and yet. she so dumb to solve the problems
both her(mc/evil mother) and child doesn't have good relationship in 7yrs. she knows that in the novel the mother doesnt like the child, instead making effort of reconciling to the child and make amends to love him so the bad route won't like the novel. she use another child to be a shield for her .she's focus to the daughter in law(ogfl novel) for the sake of being the shield against to the father and son(ogml) in case the present becomes like the novel. she's annoying. outta here.
from the first moment I saw this Mr.spirit guy I know there's gonna be a thing between them especially how attach the mc to him. when he was a child
i get why author pull mr.spirit to be the love interest coz spirit guy have a long life span. although igni and lord moon also have long life span there's no love interest can happen the way they interact with the mc.
another adult uke who was weak and lost his sane on lust. knowing that he's already an adult with experience in life and yet he can't handle this fucking highschooler guy. I was expecting that the story involved with an adult cos there's 8yrs mention at the title and et dang they choose a high schooler troupe and make him the assaulter. he's already red flag on his age and being a student. his personalities was worst and really a red flag. he's really a fucking dick. it was also involved on sexual assault and coerced.this is so disgusting especially how they gonna be end up together.
ps. I didn't see much the cover. so I only know him a hs student at chapter 1 or 2
the blonde guy on cover. I thought his chest was a breast of a girl lmao. I didn't notice that the blonde person was a guy until I read it on latest chapter hahaha.
ps. I didn't see the genre. coz I was focus on the cover and click the story to read
what a dumb plot. prolonging the lie to get ml and fl to stay together. when fl can be honest. the fl dumb way of stressing her self by overthinking of ml being bad due to the novel when she can say it honestly why she did it. it was self defense on her part coz ml try to assault her when the cursed attack and ml might understand her why she did it but then they choose the dumb way of taking a slow route of telling honestly and mostly make the ml misunderstand and fastly fall to the mc after some time of being together. his personality becomes different after falling to the mc really fast.. the romance sucks so I'm outta here.
I get that mc and proxy ml was getting close coz they spend long time with each other but that balcony scene (@29) where proxy ml pop out of nowhere when fl wanting for the proxy ml to meet her at night while wearing a bathroom gown and bath towel at head which is probably fresh from taking a shower coz there's a weird water drop on her hair. gahd.
she did not even cover herself knowing she's just finished taking a bath awhile ago and not wear a sleepwear clothes yet after seeing him is such a weird and turn off scene. it's lowkey cheating vibes for me. that's not a normal scene. proxy guy is known to her as husband person. she didn't know that proxy ml is her husband.
she's not being conservative there far from the time setting of the story and the usual reaction of girls when a guy seen them on thin or nightwear clothes where boobs line can be seen like getting flushed and find some clothes to wear a decent clothes before talking again and yet she didn't flinch or get flush and she just okay to be seen like that still talk like her clothes at the moment is a decent one. yes it decent when your alone but at night and with a guy. that's a no unless it's your husband but on her pov. proxy ml is not her husband but husband personel staff.
we know as a reader that proxy ml is her husband. for fl, he's the proxy of her husband in the wedding. she still interacting with him because of him being the husband personal staff sent by her husband but their interaction are sometimes not normal. she's married but you'll see her wanting and having a visitor at night with this proxy guy and can be seen of 29.. the ambiance and clothes wear of her is not normal. which is look more than a friendship lmao. it's like having a third party but because we know that proxy ml is her husband, we just don't care and find their interaction okay. lol
if thinking this in other pov and he's not the undercover ml persona like being another person guy. this giving me off a cheating scenario. their friendship and meeting at night is already so sus especially the fl is a married person. it's not in line of conservatives relationship. so dropped this for now until fl knows that guy is her husband. I feel like I'm reading a cheating story the way the proxy and fl interact with each other while mc still don't know that's her husband she was interacting with.
If ml is not the proxy. she can be close and have a friendship with the proxy but still draw a line. but here nah. they are more like more than a friendship when he's just a proxy in name.
damn that scenarios at 29 give me a bit of stress. lmao oh well.. it just a fiction. so. outta here now
For me, this is so unsatisfactory
Last chapter without a glimpse of her little brother biological. I wish they put more chapter before they end it like that
i also hoping that ml's mother getting together with her friend. like finding her happiness together that runaway guy from arrange marriage. jeez but they shift the story with baby aster and that's it. jeez.
He so hilarious and funny to look at, and while reading this, tbh. I don't feel much chemistry on them. I don't feel any kilig factor, the only thing that give me emotions is that ml face. which is funny..fl reaction is so so-so to me. also I don't expect much from ml too coz he's spoiled as fuck that's why he had terrible personality growing up. so he's not likeable in terms of personality but in terms of arts he's good to look at, he really have a handsome face other than that he's literally a wealthy vase.. only good at being a rich and handsome.
blonde guy die. well it's karma I guess.
he kill mc for the sister and now this sister kill him coz of mc.. I don't get why he's the only why who die. her sister deserve it too. she only got jail and her mother. jeez.
and mc after getting power she got a staff after the illusion/dream she see. she looks like magician with a staff lmao. I thought the mc is gonna be strong. coz her blood lineage is from a a power of God and demon where the source of her mother's power that's why she become a witch and yet she need a staff to manifest her powers. after manifesting the power, she also break the red gemstone in front of the girl to make her know that she can't have it powers
the only thing that good happen in this story is that the ml met his parent and they kiss after. that's it. the end dunno if the side story.
102 chapter near the end.
they can't support what he(adopted) want for their son(legit) but they still accept his feelings toward to their son just like how they want to push him to follow his want. their mother already give concent for their son(legit) without his knowledge, giving the adopted child a chance to develop feelings with him(legit son) coz they know that their son is a headache plus they can't choose to say no to torn them apart coz both of them is their son (legit and adopted) jeez. this is so shit especially how their parents want to acknowledge his other son feelings for their child even though they don't support it and how this fucking relationship to turn the yellow hair guy becoming a mutual relationship with their brother. when he(black hair guy) starts to show his feelings to him.. we'll i guess it's gonna be a good for him coz he won't have to worry that his brother gonna get by others. he's also want to possess him without realizing yet just like how he don't want him to go back to his real mom.
but still, it's such a turn off how they put some incest groomer troupe to prolong the story when there's a co worker out there that's is not finish yet to develop.
oh well it's their own business anyway plus it's a fiction characters not true to life story. so
close your eyes and skip the goddamn scene and go to main character scene and baby's.
Lucky author put the cleanser of the eyes at the end. worth reading the end than them being the closing end. lmao I'll go away with a fluffy scene leaving on my mind.
i really want to read this novel but it sucks that it only have 11 free chapter to read and the rest are protected and locked chapter, where you need to purchase the said novel before they give you an access..sigh.. although I like what they do to give support the author but it still sucks coz my option right now is that I can't by the product itself so i guess I'll wait this manhua to stack up..
you can visit this https://peachpitting.com/novel/fp if you want to read the English translation of the novel.
ps. I'll give you heads up that you need proof of purchase of the novel coz there's a form on that novel which decide if they can give you a password or not and one of the needed is proof of purchase and your social media acc. so you won't get upset when you see that requirements.
tbh. what they do is good especially supporting the author works. so if you have money and not lacking in banks and ID. then do. support the author works.
I see a Junior High School Student(probably 12 to 15 age) who met an Elementary School Child. So, mc was a minor too when they met and also watch the Kid grown up(high school) and treat that child as a brother but grown romantically feelings. after all, that kid was upfront telling his likes of him and he was kiss to boot by the kid on cheeks where he realize that he's not a brother. I don't know what's cute in this when they literally grown together to adult.
The Cover Drawn me in to read this (He's Handsome on the cover) but on Chapter 1. It already scream a Harem and A Perv MC to Boot.
Chapter 1 already have many girls at once. With A Huge And Massive Boobs + Seductive Type of Girls.
Fast paced of telling his hardship and from unlucky to become invisible at once and met a beauty. what a crap