
Art is pretty but plot and character depth are DEFINITELY lacking…No real story building/ character development to where this story makes a lasting impression. Everything is surface level from the gang and its motives, the relationship between the main characters, their backstories, etc…There’s no substance that makes this writing stand out and the author doesn’t explore much of the characters dialogue/perspective/ feelings in-depth… Everything was just kinda thrown at us without any explanation making everything seem rushed…. I was really expecting more because of the high ratings, but if you’re looking for something to just read this is at least tolerable and has decent art

I feel like I could get on board with this if the author had shown us the reason for the seme’s revenge before this all happened. At least glimpse’s…I understand the bottom was a raging asshole but seeing all this shit happen to him without any reason (yet) is so hard to digest as a reader, and yes I understand through the spoilers that the bottom did some fucked up shit, but this is hard to justify from the knowledge we have now
(based on the story pacing and not the novel) and just looks like rape/humiliation fetish…( ̄∇ ̄")
Tbh I don’t even mind the slow burn with this because the world building and plot is so interesting and attention grabbing…the smut everyone is looking for doesn’t even fit in with the story as of now, not saying it won’t eventually get there. I really like this story, it’s a cool fantasy that has B.L in it, not a B.L set in fantasy. It’s the best of both worlds (▰˘◡˘▰)
It's a cool fantasy that has B.L. in it, and it's a good romance, and the other relationship are well written too... and... ARGH there just too much good thing in this story (▰˘◡˘▰)