I.need.a.short.coma's Topics (179)

I totally get and agree with what y'all are saying about the way Leslie acted, but y'all gotta realize that this was the only person who ever showed her kindness in her entire life up until meeting the slavatores
the woman lost her job because she was kind so Leslie is a bit blinded by guilt and admiration for the lady
she's not dumb, she's just very empathetic and kind

I dunno about the rest of you lot but this seems a lettle bet shady init luv
*now read it normally*
like the mc could easily solve the situation if she spoke up and defended her sister and it would make them friends
the heroine's friends always get a happy ending if they actually pull through for her and stuff so make the effort to not alienate and add to the verbal/emotional abuse she has to deal with
the mc has the power to make that happen and she should
and if the heroine does end up being a two-faced twat then all the more reason
keep your enemies closer luv

glad to see that others in the comments shared my thoughts
like the premise of this story is so good
I mean a girl who accidentally becomes a genie and teams up with an ETHNIC MALE LEAD to fight bad guys already sounds bad ass
but the characters are lack luster
like her personality doesn't mesh well with the male leads and none of the characters bounce off each other well
to put it simply theres no balance
for instance, if the mc is going to be a reserved person then the male lead should be confident and extroverted
but they’re both stagnant
and I get making the male lead this way bc of his life and such but he's not evolving as a character as rapidly as needed and neither is the mc
also the side characters are also so reserved and solemn, like there has to be opposite personalities in play to create a functional character dynamic (like that bubbly maid)
there just too many of the same personality in play for this to create a sense of intrigue in the comic
and the pacing is so slow
im sad bc I really really really wanted to adore this

bruh hildert sent me
like he saw "her" like shoulder and was like "I have to take responsibility and marry her" LMAFO I LOVE HIM SO MUCH

like first there was the blond hair blue eyed European craze, then the black hair blue eyes thing, followed by the black hair and red eyes, and now theres the black hair and hazel eyes trend going on but every male lead I've seen is light skinned and theres ALWAYS a cute dark-skinned boy with sparkling amber eyes that gets his poor heart broken in these comics bc he has to serve as the second lead and or add diversity to the comic
I want a dark-skinned male lead who gets to be the baddest bitch AND gets a happy non-side-male ending

this is so so random, but I feel like Pauliana with winged eye liner would absolutely obliterate me

I recognize my self as a dramatic ass bitch, but when I read this I become a *s q u e a l i n g* dramatic ass bitch


like Im really sat here going "AHH MY BABY KONRAD!!!" "OMG PAPA SLAVATORE CARRIED HER" "AWE LOOK SHES HUGGING HER MOMMY" at such a shameless volume

I just finished reading through the whole thing in one go but I think i would have lost my mind with anticipation if I came at like chapter 10 or sumn
this really feels like its gonna be a 72 hour 6 person family road-trip kinda comic, I mean that as in I think its gonna be long as fuck
like, the way I see it, they're gonna probably have a couple of moment after chapter 100
i really like it tho it's flipping hilarious and the character dynamics are very well done

im on chapter 5 but ive seen enough of these bs stories to know that shes gonna end up with dollar tree Flynn Rider
i hate it here

what the fuck just happened ?
are the repressed parts of his memories surfacing ?
I wonder if hell have a slight personality change as a result
I wouldn't mind seeing a "selfish" version of him bc he never does anything for himself