THIS is how you make a cute female lead without watering her character down into some bimbo. The female lead can stand on her own and has just the right amount of innocence to her that it doesn't make her look completely stupid. I love this. Male lead matches her perfectly. He's not too detached to the point that he's an irredeemable asshole.
I've read one before this which kind of has the same plot of "I married the daughter of my enemy to use her and bring them down" and I just felt like the female lead was written to be too dependant on the male lead where her only characteristics was that she'd help him catch bad guys. Other than that, there wasn't a strong sense of individuality and depth into her character making the male lead stand out.
Long rant sorry I just find this refreshing.
The biological dad looks ugly af like he deadass looks like a side character
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Dude either has amnesia and the other guy tries his best to make him remember or he just gets badly injured and the other guy gets stuck nursing him back to health by force.
Still on chapter one but when I tell yall the gasp I let out when I saw that pointy chin. Like man could open his mouth and his chin would pierce through the earth's core and come out the other end unscathed. Mans don't need no weapon when could slice his opponent just by looking to the side
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It's 3 am and I am desperately trying to stop laughing after reading this comment How did you even think this?
The Lombardi sisters are just so beautiful wtf like pls more of them in the next chapters
Cackling at the comments sm