The font needs some work and using Internet slang when a character is talking is a big no especially if the story is set in a older time frame the art needs work but u have the right concept and idea and I LOVE your character designs
Well ... the author draws better than me.. So
OMG sorry it's the wrong comment T T
it's ok!
I'm only here for the action and magic fuck the romance bro
poor poor rieta
man deku is just not himself
she's read the story so it's understandable for the Duke but for ain it's a surprise
this is so good ^_^
I don't like the ml
thank u Steven Edwards
coach k truly is a monster
why does she care so much
curiosity killed the cat (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜
he saved her and then she did this..
The font needs some work and using Internet slang when a character is talking is a big no especially if the story is set in a older time frame the art needs work but u have the right concept and idea and I LOVE your character designs
Well ... the author draws better than me.. So
OMG sorry it's the wrong comment T T
it's ok!