i just realized he couldve ended this sooner if he asked for a dorm transfer
like ik they would chase him down or smth but with the way hes trying to play worlds greatest detective rn he couldve clocked the vibes from the beginning and left
whats going on guys i havent read since like early 2021 bc shit was taking too long to be interesting
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this rlly got nothing going on at all. i even went ahead to read the raws and still nothing has happened like the only "big reveal" rn is that glasses guy is also a victim when it was so fucking obvious considering hes the only "okay" person in that room (also the only relevant twink)
theres so much dialogue and [inner] monologues that reveal absolutely nothing abt anything (characters, backgrounds, etc) other than whats been obvious or whats been said/implied and half of the mc's monologues is just him sucking his own dick.
mc is such a fucking edgelord n i get why but theres better ways to write an emo guy. the main side characters are also fucking boring idk how to explain it
im convinced the author was just bored asf when writing this and the entire story was to get them out of writer's block
i only ask for a wardrobe refresh...i cant stand looking at ben with his fishnets and high heels...he needs a more classy look for his character
