I love how cute this is, but does anyone else find the pacing a little odd? Idk if I’m trippin or something haha
maybe bcs it'll be a short story so it's kinda fast paced
This is average manga pacing TT
I think it's bc they don't talk much, it's a more implicit kind of pacing
I think you’re right. Even if this ends up being the standard 5-6 chapters long, something about the way they barely talked to each other in the beginning and kinda skipped over how they became friends made me feel like I was missing panels lul.
Holy shit I’ve never seen that low of a rating before. Now I HAVE to read this to find out what’s going on…
EDIT: Yeah, this was ass, but the most annoying part for me was that persistent line of shadow that the artist kept drawing across the top’s face???
The intrusive thoughts are saying they should fuck at least once
EXACTLY