HE'S A FUCKING TWIG HAVE MERCY ON HIM YOUR HANDS ARE ALREADY A DICK TO HIM DONT TORTURE THE POOR GIRL- I MEAN BOY
I havent heard of this story in a while and I come back to check the comments just to see it in shambles over the teacher the clarifications are hard to deal with when the story hasnt updated at all
Tsk tsk so much to fix and it feels like this'll be the final season...
Saw this being recommended, guess Im not reading this then LMAO
Hmm, why does it feel like the plots... smoothness and comprehension kind of went downhill after ch13 or somewhere there? It feels like a bunch of dialogue/scenes were cut out that would have provided more to the story but they cut it out since it looked like it "wasnt important" but it was since now it just looks like most scenes are incomplete. LIKE WHY did Josh and Chase start flirting at each other?! That felt so sudden and script-improvised! I felt no such development to warrant them being attracted and aggressively friendly or joke-flirty. Just suddenly like 2 dolls pushed on to each other by the author for the sex to be put in quicker instead of just developed like "people retold as a story" if that makes sense... I'll keep reading tho, despite the odd flow of narration and delivery I'm still curious how Chase will change and I'm waiting for that ending of Chase meets the precious baby boy
If an Alpha bites in any part of the body even the ear ans counts it as a mark, the ass would have been the best spot
"Make me look like a bad boy high schoolrr" Nah, you just look like the hot shot prince from Princess Mononoke with his shirtless sleeves
The romance genre finds a way and if it means breaking the glasses rule THEN WE BREAKIN IT BOYS! Both the plot and the author is persistent and unshakeable
COULD YOU TALK BEFORE FUCKING?! I THOUGHT THIS WAS A WHOLESOME STORY, WHY IS SO MANY STORIES JUST FUCK FIRST, MISUNDERSTAND SECOND, BEAT AROUND THE BUSH THIRD AND FINALLY TALK ON THE FOURTH STEP??? I'm so tired of generic sex-for-the-viewer-eyes is priority before character importance confliict plotliiinneeesss... I guess I'm on my "I crave great writing" phase after binge reading Gachiakuta.... --- I know, different genres BUT THE SKILL IN HANDLING THE STORY IS WHAT I MEEAANNN
LMFFAAOOOO I CANT BELIEVE I FOUND A BL STORY WHERE MY DELULU FANTASY OF THE MAIN COUPLE GETTING FOUND OUT BY THE MASSES COMES TRUE
WAIT WHAT?! THE VIEWERS PROMISED ME THE BOSS ACTION DRAMA WHAT IS THIS???
He's got that Zuko fever, knocked out cold with a fever called metamorphise and then quickly making a big mistake (Betrahing Uncle Iroh; suggesting full debt paid) lol
Bookmarking this chap for the hilarity at the start lmao also rip ass lets give him a moment of silence
HE'S SO FUCKING COOOLLLLL FUCK ME AND DARK EYEBAGGED BLUE HAIRED GUYYY AAAAAAAA
Baby girl he's not wearing a mask dont make the poor man bald
