
It’s ok but it’s a little cringey. The mc is your typical weak, flustered, pure protagonist. I feel like the mc opened up to the middle school dude way too quickly. First chapter and she’s already telling him about her unrequited love and how she has to give up or whatever. Like girl you met him one day ago. He asks you a question and you spill out your entire love life? Anyways not my cup of tea but I’m sure it’s a good story.

Same I’m sure it’s good, but I just didn’t like how things started...imagine if she didn’t fall for him that would be like(correct me if I’m wrong) sexual harassment. If I was her I’d slap him lol. I’m sure his feelings are pure but they way he went about it in the first few ch, them teasing methods were a no no. But it’s the cliche manga where the younger guy gets attention from fl by being pushy(in trying to make do fall for them).
I honestly don’t think the art is that bad. Sure, it could be way better, but it’s not horrible, and in all fairness I’ve seen much worse. My issue is with the mc. For some reason I find her a little annoying. She says every single thing out loud, and the way she talks just..
irks me. It’s probably because the mc hasn’t been to the human world though, so it’s not her fault. Overall the story is kind of bland. Nothing about it really stands out or anything. I also don’t really get why the mc feels guilty or like she’s imposing on the duke because she literally saved his life and gave him temporary immortality. Like if anything the duke should be treating her a lot better, and the mc shouldn’t be on tip toes around the duke.