So I’m just gonna talk about the first story our first MC
The guy that Cost the assault to happen the one that basically planned the whole thing I only do believe he deserves forgiveness from the MC for the MC’s benefit for him to be able to move on but otherwise that child does not need forgiveness from the other guy he does not deserve it because I believe it will be extremely toxic for both of them anyways what the guy needed both of them actually needed therapy and the one that caused the assault needed to go to a juvenile detention center he properly needed to get in trouble but of course that’s not gonna happen because Adults are useless in the genre more than 90% of the time
Also the MC and general needed therapy like lots of it I don’t know what his family did not seek it out but as I said adults are fucking useless I also don’t believe he needed to go to the guy that marked him ever because I feel like it’s forced I feel like he’s putting on him is savior complex being like oh it’s enough for me to be able to be with him I feel like there’s multiple things that he said he can’t just talk it out with his partner and it be all right I don’t think they’re good for each other either it feels very forced in the MC side I feel like he’s just settling because he has given up to some extent
I believe that if he hadn’t been marked or even I also forgot to say even if the other guy felt that he still needed to go to get in trouble and everything But as I was saying I believe that even if he wouldn’t of been marked he wouldn’t of been together with a guy but he is right now with everything as an outcome of how you go through your path and the choices you have so when it comes to faith that’s something that I believe that goes beyond at some degree that would be fine in any situation and any path you take currently so I don’t believe it’s inherently a bad thing they keep talking about like I need to it doesn’t matter but OK it doesn’t matter because of the situation wise if he wasn’t in that situation he
would’ve gone to the black haired guy maybe the Blondie the little Blondie that did the assault did not know what would’ve been the outcome if he just left him alone maybe the Black haired one would’ve been like no I still choose you the Blondie because it would’ve been up to him at the end of the day and it would’ve just been your job not to legitimately take it to extremes because if you did I really do believe that you need psychological help but just to talk about it and it was only because of a look I do believe there has been some thing took it out of the story because I remember more in that side of the story but I don’t believe anybody in the first story is actually right for each other and I get to the point that I couldn’t focus on the second story so I don’t know my rating is still like three stars to two stars
I agree the other omega who lead the rape shouldn't have been forgiven. He should have been put in jail. And the ML has no right to get back together with the MC cuz he still raped him. But what can we say? This is how the OmegaVerse world works. The rules followed in this world are non-sensical. Alphas are shown as supreme creatures and are considered the gods whereas the Omegas are considered as low class 'animals'. Omegas are treated in such a way as if they are creatures whose sole purpose is to be fucked and give birth to alphas. So what I'm trying to say is that even if Rika (the MC) would have reported him...The adults/authority/Government whatever would have just brushed it of as an accident and would have just blamed the MC because he is an omega. This is sever Victim blaming. You got raped? Well it's your fault for going out of the house. They don't believe that alphas can do anything bad. So in conclusion Rika had no choice but to let it go. It was stupid of Rika to get together with the man who raped him and even more stupid of him to forgive the other omega. If I were or if anybody (with two brain cells to spare) was Rika they wouldn't have forgiven little blondie. But as I have mentioned Rika has no power/choice in this situation all because he is an omega. The little blondie would have gone scot-free anyways so Rika choose to let it go.
I agree with what you’re saying. My thing is that the other guy was also an omega so he would’ve gotten in trouble it would’ve been this weird what should we do but maybe we shouldn’t because of the reputation of the school maybe but like they would not want to be associated with anything like that so they would’ve maybe done something about it but they were blaming everything on the guy that marked him they were focusing too much on that
And what he did
But the guy who was an alpha that was dating the Blondie that orchestrated the assault would’ve probably said yeah he did do that because at that moment he did not want to be with him and it’s not just that he needs to jail it’s mostly that he needs therapy they all need therapy even the one that committed the assault even if he didn’t not that and it’s not exactly that they shouldn’t have gotten together is more like the way that they got together it seems too much like hero complex because of how many times he had saved him in that little span of time.
But I know but it’s always been like this it’s just that after reading it so many times I see so many flaws in my Opinion in my enjoyment of this has gone down
There would’ve been multiple more ways to make this better
Yep! Totally agreeing with you here. All these MFs need serious therapy instead of happy endings. There could have been so many ways to make this better. The blondie could have just told his alpha to not look at others. He didn't have to lead a whole goddamn rape. I want emphasise that the rape as not needed. The MC hadn't even done anything. The blondie's boyfriend had just turned back to see who it was and so did the MC they weren't doing the deed. They didn't even talk, They weren't even in the same class yet he just casually ruined another guys life. He has way too much of an inferiority complex. He should be in jail with continuous therapy. And the ML well I don't know about him tho but each character here needs therapy.
I know what you mean about him yeah I was very confused on how I should feel about him and then I realize no he does need therapy because a lot of what he does how he does it
Because I don’t remember exactly what he had to leave I can’t remember specifically I have to get up again but I think after he left he probably fantasized about the way that he was or the way that he thought he was and after a while he excepted it doesn’t matter because the whatever he is those are my expectations like he was forcing it and because I’m pretty sure he also had trauma from what he did because of that when he did like him so doing something bad for somebody that you like it’s never other thing so him fixing it basically felt like I need to like this person no matter what because I ruin their life even if it was by accident that’s how I felt there is a better way to explain it but like my brain is jumbled
Yep!
I will say there was some things I didn’t like like RMC’s character when he was with a guy later on like he was I think I know that he’s been hurt but the way that he was acting for 30 year old it’s very very selfish it felt like he was pushing him too much and I felt too extreme in some cases
What the fuck that didn’t seem like an ending I didn’t even notice it was completed what the hell this has so much stuff left out and I mean so much stuff that could be added on that actually would seem very necessary
OK a couple things that I really want to talk about in chapter 2 his little speech when he got pushed or was put I don’t know into another world that’s exactly the feeling of a lot (I think) of Bl or even straight Romans readers like you don’t actually want the person you don’t actually want to be there you may talk about it but you don’t actually do you like watching do you like being a by standard you like that you can and it’s not real and it was put so beautifully even though the story went like it did
OK but just saying if my life is like it is now and it did suck I might think about staying thing about it but like if my life was good like his was I would’ve said bye-bye bitch and never come back
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Also it’s still like in my head the fact that him and the turtle would’ve had to share him our Like I feel bad for the turtle like I hate him but like I feel bad for him because they were one person at one point I also can’t get over the fact that our ML kind of love them at one point but it makes sense because they were one person conjoined twins type of thing
There’s one chapter before nine it’s missing in at the bottom I don’t know if you’ve seen this but two pages are like flip-flopped like their misplaced I haven’t noticed any others
I knew that I wasn’t gonna like this the minute the other person got involved first of all I hate with a passion love triangle type relationships they may try to pass it is a poly relationship but it’s not whatsoever it doesn’t seem willing it’s extremely forced
I did read some spoilers and this is not exactly a spoiler but it does seem Quite forced It’s good while it lasted I read up to chapter 28 it was quite good I’m a little disappointed I’m not gonna lie
When it comes to the characters the blonde I just met has absolutely no substance Alex the only one that I can Remember the name of his character development so far and what we understand about him just goes away his character doesn’t seem like it should be it seems quite odd later on because of the spoilers I just don’t feel like it’s natural To develop that way
In the guy our main character Our bottom him I know he was a coward that’s OK but like he was never reckless like some people are saying if you think about it he knew he was a coward so he properly head and didn’t take like Avett risks if anything they came to him because of the people that he associated with he’s a bad judge of character to some extent unless it’s dangerous for him and the only time he actually took risks when Alex was right next to him because he knew that he would come get them even though of some thing he’s done he actually helps him But for some reason right after the board comes it just he stops doing that he just acts willy-nilly like what
And as I said before the relationship is 100% not a poly relationship it’s quite worst it doesn’t seem OK it’s very much more like a love triangle than anything else and not even that because one of them is legitimately just a psychopath the other one psychotic not a psychopath
I love this so much for the fact that it’s still interest you and it’s so chill like there’s none of the usual oh my god why did this have to happen and it makes no sense why it’s in the story either or it just you just have to deal with the fact that that happened but this is just really good it’s so cute That is interesting and kind of funny because he’s such an airhead and they both are in different ways and it’s weird it’s adorable
PS I’m pretty sure even since I started kind of pointed out that they were the two alpha’s either have had sex together or made out a lot I’m pretty sure they have because there was one scene OK this one’s a little dirty I guess but like when they both went in you could see only the little butt hole of one of them ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
I don’t do threesomes like this because it usually just ends up being a love triangle and I hate it so I was so worried but I tried it I was like oh no by the third chapter I was worried is going to fall into a love triangle but no (▰˘◡˘▰)
There’s only one thing that made me a little bit mad I guess kind of it did that makes me a little bit annoyed at the end when they said he didn’t go back to school I was so disappointed
because it was really cliché and the fact that they usually make the omega or the bottom in the relationship have a lesser standing but also there was another big problem with that he was a rich kid that already had his life planned out but he already wanted that he had all the resources before no I get it but
When he got with them he still had the chance of going back to school and the fact that one of the chapters he was so worried about one of his tests and they’re like oh you’re really studious even though the way you look or whatever and it just kind of made me mad that he never went back to school I’m finished I’m pretty sure he only had like a year and a half to go because what do you like second or third years already That’s my only complaint
Everybody wanting to see the second couple what the fuck is wrong withYou guys you do remember that that guy that you want to see that sucking couple Blondie he said in one of those panels I don’t mind that they all get raped it looks like he did tell the other Omega’s but he left it out for the guy specifically I don’t know the vendetta he had with him it was never explain to them what the fuck