
I read this on a complete whim, and besides some issues like specific on this one my mind was kind of I didn’t see that coming this how random it felt bro try to screw his own mother that God was his mom, and most likely was avoiding him because of those weird ass feelings he had that’s just bro somebody told me that like way later on and I would completely break the fuck down also the fact that he was like in middle school and that most likely thousand year old God like oh yucky but yeah otherwise this was kind of interesting

Literally.
That second story started and I immediately was like "Oh no, I feel something sus coming".
Then it kept getting worse...
I was like "bro ??? Don't you think it's sad your old man is gon be dead ??? Why do you feel it's okay to wanna f*ck his man too ???"
Bro has been waiting for an opportunity since the dy he was born.
The dad has raised his own opp.

Just like everybody else but I won’t lie and say that I wasn’t curious yes I was curious, but this is way too much time wasted wasted two whole chapters on this shit. It should’ve been half of chapter in that’s it. They should’ve just crammed everything in there there was no need to use a whole chapter in most likely the other chapter and half a chapter that they used.

I love this I don’t know if it’s just that I’m currently not in the mood to read this specific thing, but I feel like it’s dragging and it’s kind of pissing me off like these three chapters just ugh

I’m glad I’m not the only one. I love this story and it makes me laugh, but I’m getting a little tired waiting for the plot to progress.. it seems like a lot of the same back and forth and I’m afraid with the way it’s going it’s gonna be forever until we see any plot changing climatic moments… idk it sucks but I’m still gonna read it though lol

Bro, the art looks so bad like what’s up with his face like he already had a pretty boy face that was good whatever but now It just looked really bad and then there’s the blacksmith girl what’s up with her body that scene was a fucking mess like the whole thing was off it was awful. It’s deteriorated so bad it’s no longer cool either when you see them do anything with monsters it just doesn’t look as good as it could, there was only one scene in those 3-2 chapters that I read that I liked and it was just the blood spray one but his face. Still looks weird.

The beginning is actually really good. Thought her sister might be dead or things might be good but I don’t like where it is right now chapter 48 sucked ass I don’t like her reaction to it. I think it’s genuinely just bad I don’t like how he decided to try to fix the problem I don’t like any of it or they keep genuinely should’ve just told her no he will need to sleep just go tomorrow and we can talk about this before you decide to go.

I really enjoyed. This, I actually found this one quite cute. I also really enjoy when it comes to specific plot the sub, dum dynamic is very versatile in the way that authors can get their two main leads to interact with each other in which way that will form I’ve read quite a couple in this specific plot, but they’re all very different when it comes to the house even if they’re all happy and things, they are very different when it comes to interacting with each other in how the relationship actually forms till the end not just because they can have slight differentiation between the universes of sub DOM, but I genuinely enjoy how creative the authors are with Holly shoulder relationship through the specific plot. It’s awesome.
OK I have certain issues because I came immediately to the comments after finishing I didn’t even read anybody else’s yet. I fucking hate his haircut. I hate it with the passion of 1000 freaking sons that shit is bad I hate it I was so angry that better grow that better grow fast because it’s so ugly.
Number two I just realized Theo he has orange cat behavior because he’s an orange cat. I’m so dumb I didn’t realize that but because of that his luck is maxed out. It’s adorable.
literally just did the exact same thing, i fucking hate the haircut
If it’s not even because I’m obsessed with long hair either or anything like that there is a lot of short haircuts that look really really good. It’s just that the art didn’t help his head looks like a cone because it looks like it’s getting smaller towards his head and he looks like a completely different character. They change the proportions in a weird way, it doesn’t look good either. I’ve never like that type of haircut either. It looks really thin. It looks like his hair is thinning.
no, literally !! i don't even like long hair but his haircut just does NOT fit his face, nor his vibe
some people have been saying he's got an older "daddier" vibe and i just do not see it