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From Yaoi Is Life:Although Monji (a student) is having a sexual relationship with Chiba, a friend fr...

?I lost control... because I like you.?Childhood friends Aoi and Ryouta recently started sharing a r...

Kakeru Arao is a self-centered host. Satoshi Niizuma is a freaky best-selling author who stalks him....

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I don’t think that this story needs a climax, specifically the climactic moment where there’s always like one of the partners gets kidnapped or there’s a huge misunderstanding to the point that they break up and then after they get back together there, everything gets resolved magically I don’t think this story means that I think this story needs soft progression and it could do very well without it Without big climax that could fix the whole freaking thing as it is I think they should have a normal couple miscommunication but not leave each other. I don’t think it’s necessary. I think the small little burst of uncomplicated is enough to get the emotion necessary across.

I don’t know why I’m saying this even though I know this is kind of why I’m just trying to put my thoughts out there because they’re reverberating and they won’t stop

But the reason for the debit not being paid off, so he has a reason to hunt our babies and beat the crap out of him as well as he doesn’t want him to feel 100% and debited to him and a separate thing that has nothing to do with him in the first place The debit that is as well as that he still working, he does have his own money that he has and I really love that

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Oh my God, of course I’m gonna like this. This is by the same person that made the man in the mirror.

Naoki Kujo is an average, run-of-the-mill office worker who can't get any dates. Every time he hears...

I quite like it but the ending clearly felt rushed and I fucking hated those women in the way that they were acting like oh my God everything he did was fake. Of course it was fucking fake. He’s acting. That’s his job. It’s a fantasy that he’s selling. There’s a very clear difference Between him as a person and him as an actor, even if they’re similar I’m pretty sure this is Korean so Korea really has this thing where they just do not want to put the difference between those two necessities. It’s gotten a lot better though. I remember this girl that I went to high school with and we were both into K-pop and there was a scandal about member don’t remember which band it was dating somebody and she went like crazy like oh my God no he can’t date anybody. I’m like bitch. What the fuck do you think he’s gonna date you he’s he’s a 26 year old man, you are barely 15 years old be for real. It’s so stupid. Some people are so stupid and so irrational.

I’m actually gonna take a break from the story I’m at like halfway through to the current point and I’m just gonna let it marinate to probably completed just for the fact that it’s starting to piss me off. There’s a specific plot line that the author uses when it comes to information when the MC finally asks, A very important question is about to be given They always get interrupted to the point that it’s Getting very overdone and that every time he tries to find information somebody has to come in the Starting to get really annoying That I will come back when this is completed

After being abandoned by his influential family for being (Ω), Kisaragi Akito sells his body f...

I feel like the author fucked up really bad. I went to reread certain and things just to check it out a bit and reread some of the comments and I’ve come to the conclusion. The author just didn’t know where to take the story after her resolution. why are you bringing back a plot that has already been semi resolved it doesn’t have to be completely resolved, but she already had that development. She could still feel anxious feelings and that still would’ve been OK, I felt like the author just didn’t know how to properly do it. I don’t know. I don’t know what the hell they were going for, but it was clearly not this. If it were up to me, the second plot point of the story, would’ve been her trying to find her Into a little bit of trouble like that maybe even having more development as a character that makes sure a very strong character. The story is cliché, but it was good until that point where her development literally meant absolutely fucking nothing could even been about her developing where she came from because she literally should’ve been what were they counts or something, they should’ve swallowed that. Oh, I care about the people there still. If they had done, that would’ve been nice, but I get that because the romance was no longer there like development of the romance. The author was like oh no, let’s just make her stupid.

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Bro, I was supposed to to let this marinate again and I didn’t. I am incapable of seeing a chapter here and not reading it.(╯°Д °)╯╧╧

Calahan, a famous hunter who has captured 999 wanted criminals, chooses Johnny the Grifter as the fi...

OK, so I had the story in like my saved to read stories for so long and I hadn’t read it for the fact that
I don’t like this style and men specifically a man that is really hairy and it’s not a bear type is not my thing specifically hairy butts. I find them to be very discomforting. OK so it took me a while but I freaking love it. I love this. I wish that there was a little bit more detail the certain aspects. But I really enjoyed it

On his way home after an evening out drinking, Shiratori Tomoe meets a roughed up man named Zen. He ...

I feel like there’s missing information and as well as in general it feels like there’s things that are missing.
Like at the start, his reactions, and the way that he went about things just feels a little bit unnatural like the grasp for information wasn’t really there that you would have in that situation . he feels a little bit like a Marionette.

But I didn’t really finish up to the part that everybody is at now wanna come to reading I stopped. Because of this I’m not that far off though from where everybody is.

He a character that like he’s right above water very non-interesting in certain ways like he’s not trying to do anything it’s weird the way that he eats his follows without question without thought if you think about it and

that he feels like he just possessing that body and (even if he is) and not that he possibly just remembered his past life that he doesn’t question himself or that he’s so unattached from all the other characters like his siblings, his parents, even the potential targets. he doesn’t see them like the they are now his family they’re not just this person in this person. They are now his family they see him like that. They will cry for him. He doesn’t see the severity of everything. I don’t think he properly gets it. I know that the siblings can be annoying, but still the fact that he feels so accomplished when he lies to them. Even if to spare their feelings it’s weird.

His actions feels like he’s an adult and other times he’s a child and other times he doesn’t realize that he’s a child it’s very weird weird and he feels like I said before a puppet it’s strange maybe it’s just me, but the author makes me feel like they don’t know how to properly write a BL guy in this specific situation. It’s just not hitting right.
He doesn’t act like a guy. But this is just my opinion. I just wanted to share it but don’t get mad if you think it’s amazing or whatever because it is good it’s just missing something.

So I kept reading out of curiosity. And there’s a couple reasons why I will not be coming back to this.

There’s the a couple of reasons like the fact that it kind of started dragging at one point I wanted to be done with it and it wasn’t even like oh let’s take a break type of situation, i won’t say it’s because it a Chinese BL I think and they don’t do spicy scenes justice in my opinion, or like it all but I don’t know why they’re added when they are like this it feels like it needs it to make everything more cohesive but it’s not even just like frustrating it’s annoying drags out the story weirdly and I don’t like that not saying that they all need it. It’s just that some do

My second biggest is the unsatisfaction of the fact that he was basically forced the betrayal of how it happened and it wasn’t consensual I didn’t like that. It felt not just unsatisfactory. It felt wrong not like something you could’ve fix

Now, for like my biggest fucking reason the age gap the HR is shit. He knew him when he was a child right now he’s 17 and he’s 28 it’s gross and uncomfortable. The only thing that could possibly make it a little bit better not a lot because the black guardian would still seen him as a child and acted that way and kind of had feelings for him so just a little bit make it better if he was also reincarnated in or another that would’ve made it better even a fractionally because the age gap keeps putting me off it’s very uncomfortable even if he’s the bottom it is it’s still no