
Seeing the comments i thought it would suck but its not bad at all. Not perfect oc but i really liked it haha
It has plot with a little smut sprinkled in too. Gave me a scare for a bit but the way it was turned around made it even better in the long run. Feel bad for the friend tho, he deserves happiness and ig i wish there was a part for him to move on. But the read is fs so worth it! You have a stranger's word :)
I personally prefer Etelle rather than Ethel, it just has a prettier sound to it. But this is just my opinion and you can do whatever you like, but I would be delighted to see if you kept it as Etelle.