
My only problem with this (as a fiction work) is that she feels nothing. I mean, he's pouring his all due to circumstances but she just doesn't care, she is merely following orders. She's dominating him but feels no joy nor pleasure from it, and is just making me feel sad that she's so... unattached.
I hope we get to see Derrick's breakdown. I want to see him mentally collapsed. Crawling on the dirt like a worm!