1. Too much sex without any emotional development.
2. Too much muscle.
3. Too many "uggh Ahh ahh" written all over the artwork.
4. When the face of the uke and seme isn't good. I'm more focusing on the face artwork. It's not properly drawn
5. When it shows first time sex very pleasurable. No hurting. I'm like dude. His ass is getting ripped for God...... 2 reply
did periods
