The dialogue and the flow of the conversation feels natural, I was actually grinning while reading this?!! A miracle, I hope it stays that way. I'm looking forward for more.
Yanu casually tearing his shirt apart, on a public space mind you, was ironically funny. Even toddlers are more predictable than whatever he's doing.
The casual touches being intentional yet subtle is quite realistic, I like it. Lee Hyun placing his hand suspiciously close to Baek-ya is one example. Besides the peck on the lips, is there something you need to tell us Hyun?
"If it's not "ordinary...", you're better off without it" Haha felt, internalized homophobia hurts so bad if you're a queer, I wish the best for her.
I hate it whenever a story introduces a flawed character and people would jump on them immediately. It's not that hard to comprehend and read between the lines tbh. I assure you, these two men are adults, they can handle this well without being immature like so many comments on here.
No I totally agree with you and it kinda sounds like she was repeating something someone had said to her? Like maybe she had a crush on a girl and the crush or her friends told her thats not normal or “ordinary” as she said, thats what Im thinking
Oh you get it! I'm glad someone can actually comprehend what they're reading. And yes, that's most likely what happened, younger children can be easily influenced. They're like a wet cement, everything that comes to them will stick immediately and that cement would dry and the things into will be hard to get out.
Alright, I'm expecting what the comments would be and I'm not surprised. Y'all will villainized women/GIRLS at any BL story (and have zero reading comprehension, the only reason why they're hating her lmao)
It's really not that deep that seal dude wasn't even upset by it she's literally a kid to him (----- O -----)
Readers would doubt whether or not Kuro truly loves Iwanaga, and I get that, but it's funny to me that Rika think the opposite. To Rika, Iwanaga only uses Kuro for her duty as the God of Wisdom (take note that even Iwanaga could not argue with that). Kuro and Rika's existence ruins the natural order, so it makes sense to kill Rika, to which is what Iwanaga's trying to do throughout the story, but the same applies to Kuro, would it not? Rika thought that Iwanaga would not fear killing or more specifically, sealing both of them, and she's not even scared that she doesn't care at all. What does that say about Iwanaga? "If you have any shred of humanity left in you" Rika cleverly used Kuro against Iwanaga, manipulating her into thinking that she would not care if Kuro disappears as a part of her duty. Rika led her into thinking a scenario where Kuro disappears and guess what? Iwanaga is mortified, thus collaborating with Rika in the end.
Kuro understands Iwanaga's circumstances the most. She was a child when the monsters kidnapped her, took her one eye and chopped one leg to make her a "God". It is not at all an honourable title to be bestowed on, she's a disposable God if she can't serve her purpose anymore. Kuro understood that and feared for her; she disregards her safety because of her disposability, and she's not even scared to be replaced right after. Kuro's powers were given to him solely to protect and help Iwanaga, as he very much believed to be the case. "In sickness and in health" he said. Iwanaga exists to be the God of Wisdom, and Kuro exists to be with her.
Kuro understands Iwanaga's circumstances the most. She was a child when the monsters kidnapped her, took her one eye and chopped one leg to make her a "God". It is not at all an honourable title to be bestowed on, she's a disposable God if she can't serve her purpose anymore. Kuro understood that and feared for her; she disregards her safety because of her disposability, and she's not even scared to be replaced right after. Kuro's powers were given to him solely to protect and help Iwanaga, as he very much believed to be the case. "In sickness and in health" he said. Iwanaga exists to be the God of Wisdom, and Kuro exists to be with her.
That is very much true. But sometimes it wouldn't hurt Kurô to actually show his love for Iwanaga but aparently he's too much of a esteemed Kuudere to let that happen (=3=)
Thank you for replying. I'd supposed that part of him is something that manifested deeply from his trauma, with being immortal and all. It was mentioned that Kuro is being his unapologetically self with Iwanaga compared to his previous relationship, so that counts for something. I supposed he has repressed a lot of things due to his immortality but with Iwanaga, that's not the case anymore. I guess he should work on expressing affection more.
You are indeed correct. As it is also shown in Saki san's thoughts that Kurô lets his guard down for Iwanaga (or something like that). I do wish to see if he could ever be a jealous one, that I do wonder:3
I'm crying. I'm crying. I'm crying. I'm crying. I'm crying. I'm crying.
I don't know about you guys but I prefer the brat (who's literally just a kid at the moment, he's bound to be like that) than Ya yul who literally killed MC with no remorse in her past life. Taking into the account that Namgung treated her nicely too in her past life.
I can already tell Ya yul would be the "possessive" type and maybe borderline yandere. Which I don't seem to like possessiveness is not good for me. But Yeon's ability is really helpful, even if she can't do martial arts, it's a valuable ability. I want to see more of it in the future.
I was waiting for someone to acknowledge that Baekya is, in fact, cute. Good thing Hyun is in love, great job.