If it turns out the ML didnt shop for the shamans clothes imma be like huh!! Dude better be the one having the most to say on fashion cause otherwise why the metrosexual thing, they could've just said hes straight and put it into a character analysis his love of clothes and shopping.
It looks interesting but the sports announcers play by play sounded super cringey. I'll read a little but more and see if when they go back to the past, the dialogue becomes less cringey. Good art though, and the way the foreigners are drawn are very good.
I didn't get to read the scanning but I'm sure they were awesome! Thank you so much for sharing your scans!
I dislike this story and it's not without reason. No hate to anybody but lemme just write them out.
1. Shes so dumb, if your going to be questioning what the princess motives are or what he wanted to say but then fully ignore him when he try's to talk to you then wtf. Also why go to all that effort of hiding yourself and then going out in a good if your gonna put your good down and reveal yourself to another noble. Also why is she apparently tough on men and strong to protect herself but this friken dude gathered her into her arms and shes just like yeah imma approach this dude and eat on his dime not like that can lead to consequences.
2. Did I miss that beginning of the story when they talk about mana or something because when the sword instructor mentioned it it felt like it came out of nowhere.
3.Girl that dress was ugly as fuck and not worth the pain of all that exercise and dieting only for you to wear that ugly af dress.
4.Why is the black hair ML wearing a mask when you can see his whole face, has it been established that that mask is magic or something cause I can see all his features even with the mask, and in the story people claim he's being a jerk for wearing it all the time and I sympathize he's being weird af thinking that mask is hiding anything. I've seen way better masks and helmets that hid dukes etc identity and those deserved the gossip they got this doesn't.
5. Black hair dude just annoys me. This one is very irrational so ignore it but I needed to type it.
6.I hate how the fl acts but it's hard to write so yall can ignore this one too.
7.The servants are actually nice in this so that's a pro.
8.The father is also supportive in this so another pro.
9.No mean stepmom or step sibling either so that's a benefit.
10. Oh yeah I haven't seen a single mention of anything about how the father adopted her as an orphan from the war how did that affect her what does that mean for the person body she occupied.
If I missed anything that changes how these should be viewed, or you think I misread so.etujng please reply I'm super free and super happy to talk. I won't reply to mean comments I am entitled to my opinion and I didn't say this is shit or the author is shit I just said I dislike the story and these characters and therefore I won't take any hate.
I agree with you ╮(￣▽￣)╭
I totally agree with you lol. I decided to dropped this because the characters are too shallow and don't even start with all those cringey lines. So cliche （￣へ￣）
I totally I agree with your points. The mask one especially but that’s been done in so much that it’s whatever to me. I enjoy it tho, is it 5/5? No. Is it Raeliana? No. But it’s not not enjoyable. I liked it
Ayy Raeliana is awesome!! I totally enjoy a masked ML as long as the mask actually hides his features and serves a purpose!! Yeah its great in its absurdity lmao
I love cringey lines but my god theres a point that shouldn't be crossed and never so early in a story. Way to cliche *blegh*
Is it bad that i dont like this like im seeing all these happy comments and im just like not only did this guy harass him at the mixer, he took advantage of his drunkeness to get 'consent', but not only that he kept on harassing the guy over and over, and the he says how could you date girls in the past when you love bottoming, first off your the one who first implied hes gay even though he said he isnt and he wasnt thinking at all about it before, second of your the first guy hes had sex with the one time how does that imply loving bottoming. idk what its about these types of stories that get my blood rolling but ughhh
I don’t see it as harassment myself, but I get why you interpret it that way. I think he was coming on strong to the black hair guy but black hair guy had opportunities to leave. I mean, the top dude even stated so himself that he was ok with black hair guy leaving but black hair guy didn’t. While the top dude did keep pestering black hair guy, I don’t know if “harass” is a good way to put it. Ultimately, it was black hair guy’s choice to see him again, that is, setting aside the albeit, loose consent from their first interaction. I also think the remarks of how black hair guy loves bottoming is probably just a very confident assumption that top dude came to after their nights together. I get your point, I really do. Some stories are just a bit...”UGH” but I think witt this one your reasoning isn’t the best. Maybe your argument could just be that you didn’t like the way the characters were written? Thats just imho tho so ur free to disagree
He was closeted though. That’s why he didn’t admit he was gay right away. And from their first time together, he noticed the black haired guy liked bottoming.
Hey sorry, I realise now that Imight have come across a little too strong cause I had read some duds at that time and I was getting tired of these dudes coming on so strongly and then being praised as romantic especially after reading two beautiful, romantic consensual stories (gay and straight) that ended in cohabitation/marriage. But yeah I think it was the love bottoming sentence that really set me off tho. Hope your having a good day and your happy and healthy!
Hi!
Um tbh Even if he was closeted I at the time felt like OK you tell him that and let Jim figure himself out maybe iniate that shit himself so he can decide whether he's actually curios about figuring himself out with you and its not just you putting yourself directly there yk. As for the second part um idk at that piont of time I was getting a little tired of seeing two people, both potrayed as tall big and overall yk kind of dudes but then they have sex that one time and he bottoms that one time and suddenly thats the only role they can do yk. Especially after reading some other stories where whether mlm or mlf they switched roles and tried diff things to satisfy and love each other and yeah. Most of the time when its modern art you also get modern ideas and that didn't get here so I was a little sad but then that sentence really set me off.
But yeah lmao hope your having a good day thank you for replying to me!
Hi, so this story is basically about him figuring it out and coming out. He wasn’t forced out. He was asked a question “Are you gay?” Which I don’t think is forcing someone to come out? He said “no” and the top was like “ok cool.” Both characters had drinks and slept together. They both remembered the night before and the the bottom agreed to continue having sex after enjoying himself. They both highly enjoyed themselves based on knowing what they like. He had been holding himself back for many years, the top actually helped him come out of the closet.
I’m wondering if you’re new to yaoi? MOST modern stories revolve characters that don’t switch. This like one out of 2637 that revolves a story about a top and a bottom. It’s pretty common in yaoi. I wonder which manga/webtoon you are referring to where they switch? I’m saying this for me so I can check it out haha.
I should say this because what you said seems problematic. Many actual gay men don’t switch. Many do and many don’t, this yaoi story revolve around men that don’t switch, which exists. In reality, many gay men prefer the “bottom” role or “top” role and I know this because I work at a club in West Hollywood. Even on Grindr ( a gay dating app) they say if they are a “top” or a “bottom.” My best friend is a gay man and he prefers only to top. He doesn’t switch with his partner. You can’t call them “not modern” or “not trying everything to enjoy himself” when he knows what he likes and that’s being a top. So I just wanted to put this out there and clear some things up.
Thank you. Have a great day.
Hey!
No Im not new to yaoi actually! I do know that in real life people do prefer one thing or another and then they stick to it. The thing I had was this guy is just realising he's gay, okay, he had sex that one time and suddenly they only try bottoming. I see that a lot in yaoi and I get really tired of it because can't you at least try that other thing before you decide that you only like the one thing. And the matter is most of the time I see these tops going like pH yeah your def gay and then having sex with them and never be in go like olh do you want to try these did things yk. Most of people in real life lhave tried dif things and so they def know what they prefer and stick to that but that doesn't happen here yk. Um Let mW get back you on that list of stuff but let me know what you like um mlm, flf, MLF, cause I'd love to recommend some stuff to you!
Oh and for the first part idek anymore I have one interpretation, you have another but let's agree to disagree on that one lol.
I hope.your having a good day, stay healthy!
They just went with the flow lol. He also could have self pleasured anally before all this and knows he likes to bottom, which he does. There is nothing wrong with being a bottom:) They had sex once and he really likes being a bottom. Hey, when you know..you know;) I am sure this has also happened in real life. Hey, I don’t care as long as they are happy.
The FL needs to get her shit together, if she doesn't want Dowun anymore then she can break their engagement, she still has her own allies that were not fostered by the Yang clan. She has the knowledge and power so if she fucking wants to stop she can, she's irritating me cause she knows Dowuns personality she knows she shouldn't expect anything romantic from him so she should make that decision herself unless it truly is that she hasn't learned anything at all and Dowun is the one who's actually doing shit which means if she doesn't want him anymore she should start to consolidate her influence and shit
that's the problem with being dependent/falling inlove (not sure if she's really inlove with dowun though), your actions would lean more on emotions rather than logic. and as far as the story shows, fl literally only has dowun's family's support so she can't just "break their engagement". they're even already planning on killing her because she's showing signs of not being controlled easily, what more if she breaks her engagement? she has no one else to support her.
you provide a rather simplified solution to a rather complicated situation
I think ingyu is dumb, ok first of he didn't want to get the energy he needed so his family locked him up I'mma assume to protect him cause if he's not getting energy then he's weak he might as well have been on the verge of death. But then he doesn't even seem to know anything about his own species and why they only eat form humans once like what you would've thought that since he had a preference for humans he would gorged on the history of succubi and humans. Another r thing is his brattiness and lack of atleast personal safety, he knows there's an unknown threat and instead of just getting kangin yo come to his cafe that's a safe space or eating from other customers he sneaks out not only endangering himself but also kangin and his guardian. Who by the way isn't even like his own servant or indebted to him but someone else's who was forced to do this or there would be bigger problems all because he wanted to have sex with humans. Like damn I would've have rooted for him if he atleast was a bit smarter. There's more but ughhh at this point I just want the secondary couple and I want to see where the plot goes. If he goes op I swear to God I'mma cry.
The naivety is part of his character since he’s sheltered. Character growth looks promising right about now. Either way, I don’t feel any annoyance when reading this story so if someone acted dumb, I shrug it off lol.
I really hope there's character growth not just him suddenly going op ykniw, but yeah imma stick around a little more and see.
For reals. It's all good tryna fight for your right, but what if the threat to his life will also be a threat to kangin's life... Then taegyu will also be dragged into it and be in danger. I think he needs to know more about his situation and think about the harm it might bring to others as well. Also how is it that he hasn't mastered his powers and just found out that he can pass through walls?? I wish he would think more and plan ahead idk I want him to get what he wants and be happy too but not at the expense of others. And I hope his dumb decisions don't hurt anyone. I'm looking forward to character development but I have a tendency to drop things if characters keep making stupid decisions.
I ship our mc with Evan and Neria but shit im a little dissapointed Iin our mc.. I thought one of his goals would have been to protect his sister's but it seems he has just forgotten about them. Not to mention he seems awfully consumed with pride for someone who used to preach patience and tolerance. Idk but I hope this is all explained maybe it's because of his half elf thing but I am concerned. Also the romance I don't really want it but if it's going to happen I really want it to be the two I mentioned above. I really want the princess to become a best friend.... But thars me lll
They are so cute!!!!!!(≧∀≦) （/TДT)/