
This reads like a novel that was adapted into a novel, with how there seems to be little to no regard as to actually making the scenes flow together, and they instead feel like a studio has picked major scenes from the novel and have decided to just adapt them into manhwa form instead of making this actually work as a standalone story.
I need you all to read a little more. Pick up on what's not being said. There is no damn reason that you need EVERYTHING in the setting spelled out for you when you have plenty of information presented in the panels.