To me this webtoon has been written poorly but it was given a 9.6 so the problem must lie with me. What is it that I’m not seeing? Normally Mangago is 99% right when it comes to their ratings so this webtoon must be good but It’s just not clicking with me
i think its pretty good, like not the best but not average
maybe u just dont dig the art? its pretty different from other styles (i think its pretty though.) so the vibes u feel kinda off, i was like that after the first few
but i dont think its "written poorly" thats not how i would describe the bad points to this
First, don't believe any rating on mango. It's almost always wrong and the worst written manga will get top ratings.
As far as writing structure, this is pretty good. The characterization is flat. But that's the rest is pretty good. What did you find bad about the writing?
The popularity could be put down to the unique plot and drama, as well as Shuli being unfazable. She's a clever protagonist.
It's also looking to be very unlikely that Shuli will end up with the prince, which is always a welcome change from standard isekai.
Basically, Shuli's entire intention here is to be a proper mother and head of house. She's also trying to keep the fortune safe so she can pass it back to the kids when they reach adulthood. In her previous life, she did well with the finances but she had nothing to do with the kids. So when it was all over, she had no family.
Tbh, I think Shuli would have been pretty happy in her original life. I don't think there was any reason why she would be more satisfied with her current one. She would have likely lived free and happy, starting from scratch. Fallen in love with someone, maybe had kids of her own.
So I don't consider this the 'good' timeline. Just another timeline.










Um our uke has really suffered and I don’t support their relationship anymore. All he did was fall in love with his captor.And his captor has the GALL, the AUDACITY to be angry that he wants to leave. Lol what a mad man. Anyway I hope this webtoon is wrapped up soon.