After so long finally. Ngl though it’s kind of on the nose wish they did it more romantically but I’ll take it.
Hot take: he should have been honest sooner. If she was a FL she would’ve had the typical I was a villain and loved a man that didn’t like me. He killed me and now I’m back to 3 years before that. Yk like it could easily have gone that way. But because she isn’t the FL the way she is treated by someone who is supposed to be the perfect ML is just too much. It ruins Alfonso a bit for me
It’s big bro with big Willy. Yeah no line will ever hit harder. Literally.
WAHT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED
RIPPPPP HIS ASS LOL
RIP#－.－)
Can’t wait for the next update (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Spoilers/review:
I really love the idea of this story and found myself tearing up throughout. I thought Dorthea would be the typical clueless FL but I wanted to read it because theon seemed promising.
Boy was I wrong. I relate so much with Dorthea and the way she is written makes sense 90% of the time. She has some issues "willful ignorance imo" but otherwise she's very relatable. Anyway, Theon is also not the male lead and I couldn't be happier, there are valid reasons for this other than Ethan being hotter which I like.
Only thing this story lacks is a compelling father figure. He doesn't feel like a real person but like a catalyst for Dorthea's trauma. if only he was written a little better like Claude ):
This is the most I have written about any story on here so I hope people can agree (:
Honestly disappointed it didn't turn out to be theon like I like both currently and lowk wish for more scenes with theon but like Ethan just seems so manipulative still so that's why I'm gravitating towards theon more yk?
Yeah I know what you mean. I was the same untill I read further in the novel. I won’t spoil more unless you want me to :)
Please spoil me :<
9/10 look it’s not perfect but it’s SO GOOD
Read it now that it’s completed ˚✧₊⁎❝≀ˍ ❝⁎⁺˳✧༚
I STOPPED WHEN THE OFFICALS STARTED COMING BUT I COME BACK TO THIS!!!??? help