Well guys it’s been a full feeling chapter. I guess we’ll be seing each other in November or next year ? I’ll be waiting for y’all
The story is quite inconsistent and a bit all over the place to be honest. Like the author is just randomly getting ideas and implementing them into the story without real story line. A few examples of what I’m saying among a lot other :
- The queen bee issues (the second one) has been intoroduced around chapter 80 but 50 chapters later still no solution, just random talks, other introduced issues (with also no solution), and it’s just circling around (same issues for the beauty berry and the growth elixir who are older problems)
- The chilly (that was my last straw to be fr) that are randomly generated, at some point he didn’t have any left (plant and seed) then 20 chapters later he’s taking care of the new plant (I just considered that the fruit was taken and that it needed time to produce them again, for my sanity) and then now, 30 chapters later, somehow, the chilly he didn’t harvest have gone missing (where ? They walked ?) and he doesn’t have anything left. He harvested ONCE, but is seen toking care of it thrice and somehow he doesn’t have any more left
Not even gonna talk of that farm land that has been empty for 119 chapters straight but somehow he doesn’t have anything to plant . He’s just gathering people around, lying his ass off for no reason, while running left and right. This guy is the epitome of being busy without doing anything at all, I should learn to do that at work
That sticker spread just killed me . Reminded me of those TikTok’s where people spread their money, I just kept hearing “bricks on bricks on bricks”
“I wouldn’t have done that if I knew you had a partner” so assaulting and raping someone is fine as long as they’re single ? This is hitting too close to home, I just hate that tomoe guy with all my gut
ikr. I got the ick when he said that
He was just going to assault him. Remember the part where he said he had no interest in having sex with a man. But he was going to use a lot of violence if that makes it any better.
« Better »..?
Better cause he wasn’t planning on raping him, yes.
You do realize your sentence has a problem right ? « He was going to use a lot of violence if that makes it better » like what ..? What made what better ?
This story is everything a D/s relationship should be honestly. Consent ? Yeah the dom never initiated a command without verifying that the sub was okay with it. Safety ? I mean just look at them .
See I don’t even know how to take this anymore, like the plot was so good at the beginning now it’s all rape and threats. What happened to development
What happened to potential
« Just think you’re Santa Claus rinding his deer Rudolph « I’m cackling I would be laughing while moaning and twitching. I love the ml so much, such a breath of fresh hair with these overly serious ml, I like them funny and weird. Him and his daughter are so cute, just another mini him with mom’s(dad’s) personality.
Damn the uncensored version scared the hell out of me, got so surprised I almost threw my own phone . Damn in my mind k was fingering onyx, I guess fapping works too
REAL I WAS LIKE HUH WOAH GIMME A DAMN MOMENT TO PROCESS
I’m fucking cackling and crying bro’s reputation and beef with people’s arm goes through space and time. Forget demon god , be it in the previous timeline or now he always took an arm for an offense
Chat is this poly or competing for the live if the mc like that one book with the dog LI ? Cause once was enough I rather do threesome than that pls