I finished reading this novel on Tuesday and I want to say a big thank you to whoever posted the link to the novel here cos they made my entire week. I couldn’t do anything else. I spent the whole of last week and some part of this week reading the novel and it was awesome. I even stopped reading all the updates of my favorite mangas and series cos I just couldn’t drop the novel for a minute.
The flashbacks made me really sad as expected but the novel was great.
I knew it. I knew it was gonna come to this. I hate to say this but it serves Wonyoung right. He had countless opportunities to tell him the truth. Even after seeing his boss had made contact with Yoon, it was the perfect time to finally open up and distance yourself for Jung’s plans but you had to keep dragging it out. I’m so annoyed.
For some strange reason, this webtoon leaves a tightening in my chest and I just can’t continue reading it. Like, everything just seems to be some huge fan service and it’s rather sad. It makes it lose taste to me. Like, how can you take a very good story and spin it around just for some angst, only to take it too far and are now relying on your readers’ opinions for a new ending? The plot should have been thoroughly thought out before being executed.
Like, who switches ships in the middle of a story??? You had us all shipping Khaol and River from the get-go. Even the summary didn’t mention Heil as a potential rival so why didn’t he end up with maybe even Forest or something?
It would have even made more sense if Khaol had allowed River to be killed because he wanted him to be turned to a god or something but for the selfish reason of being reunited with an old flame despite all the live and care River showed him is just too hard to stomach.
They didn’t even bother to give him a proper burial. The author took it way too far and I can’t fathom it.
It kinda reminds me of the Game of Thrones series with the shitty ending. I mean, one wonders how Khaleesi who was so loving and kind to slaves and innocents suddenly became mad in the space of a few final episodes and became like her « Mad Father » so much so that she had to be killed off. Same with Khaol. He might not have loved River at first when they got married but he did show him enough care and concern. So how did he just turn around to be so horrible and now Heil who had me so worried at the beginning of the story is now like a « Breath of fresh air » for River?Who turns a villain into a protagonist in the middle of a webtoon and a protagonist into a villain with no warning or anything.
It makes little sense to me and I just have to drop it and move on for the sake of my sanity.
No way it would be okay "if Khaol had allowed River to be killed because he wanted him to be turned to a god " that would be ultmost bullshit I ever read, I mean, if River somehow had forgave him believing that that was his intention no way this relationship would be okay or healthy.
I agree maybe it was too sudently but all that big plot switch, turning the supposed villain into the good guy, (or rather, being led to believe by the narrative that Khaol was the good guy) is the best thing about the whole history. Since the beggining I couldn't stand how khaol treated River, I almost stopped reading it midway thinking that River would still be with Khaol after all the shit he did, so even if Heil didn't show up as a rival, Khaol and River staying together would be worse than the plot holes that exist in order to change that.










I was reading the novel and believe me, their relationship gets better. I couldn’t finish reading the novel cos the translations were terrible. I tried my best to stick around but I just couldn’t. The grammar was so bad I started to have a headache. Like, it was so difficult to understand no matter how hard I struggled so I gave up. The only correct translation only has 13 chapters and I pray the translator would continue with it. Gosh!
Oh thank goodness. Our bby dont deserve to be treated like shit. I was debating on reading the novel soon.
I think I know the translator you're talking about. They unfortunately dropped the novel and will not continue translating. The last translated chapter was 13 :(
Yeah! That one! I am so sad. I wish someone else would take it up and translate. That’s the only translation I could understand.
Link? The manga just skips so many things I'm so confused
I can only send it via a private message as the translators have asked us to not post it openly here. But I don’t know how to start a private message so please send me a message and I can reply directly with the link.