
In the first manga Haruki was only introduced as the older brother's friend on the side story. The side story was pretty boring which was made worse with incest(tho I don't care that much tbh). I remember commenting I find Haruki more interesting than them and Holy shit was I right. Him and his story is way better lol.
Making a move on Shuu while he was drunk is no good but he didn't seem that drunk and was pretty sober based on the way he responded. Haruki also stopped when he was asked which is just basic humanity but in mangas pretty rare(sadly), so good on him. The communication level between the two of them were also pretty high and I love how shuu and Haruki had rules on their relationship. The fight was resolved fairly quick too. And I love how Shuu got along with the patrons at the bar, really cute how he's clueless about the jokes lol. Only thing I had a problem that didn't get solved the way I wanted it is that the fucking predator didn't really got what he deserved. Should've been outed as a predator. Not just a cheater but also predator... poor wife tsk

Straight up 5 stars for first story but only 3.5 for the second.
1st couple was really cute and I love how seme's expression was always stoic but his inner thoughts were panicking and so expressive!
2nd couple was mid. I'm not really a fan of pseudo incest. I mean I don't really care about incest that much in general since that their life but like the story was mid in general. It wasn't really interesting and honestly I was more interested with the older brother's friend than the brother's themselves

This was really good.
Some thoughts:
Wish mc's dad suffered for being an abusive fucker.
Gale and Robin deserves each other cause they're both crazy for each other.
Kyle's a total greenflag.
Illyan's recovery not being fast and sugar-coated is amazing.
Kyle's parents are fucking amazing.
Chris is a fucking sweetheart I love him so much I pity him for being ordered so much lol.
Sonja deserves a better dad and I hope she gets to spend more time with her brother and they can love each other.
Helena is crazy too but sane? She's amazing for building everything she has by herself.
I wish we fucking saw the weddings
I wish we fucking saw the babies they were probs gon adopt

Everything was cute and fluffy but like everyone else I also think Chika was dumb for going that far without telling him that he was a man. Like, baby... really? How stupid would someone need to be to not realize they were having sex with a man... He's very fortunate Seme wasn't homophobic and quickly came to the conclusion that he loves Chika regardless of gender(fucking sweet btw).
Loved this though and I have it rated 5starss!

Uke is so cute! I love how he does his best with trying to interact with people even with his social anxiety. Seme is kind and everything but I don't like how he tried something when uke was drunk at that one chapter. Fortunately the dog barked and seme realized what he was doing was wrong but I wished they didn't try in the first place. The German Shepherd puppies were totally adorable tho!

Chapter 1
Page 16 panel 3
- He's so cute lol. Doing his best to search for the best one for mc XD
Page 23 panel 3
- The way he's leaning into him is so unnecessary that it's gay.
Page 26
- why is he asking about his history with women? To find out whether he can be gay with him?
Page 40
- why is the fucking petals while he's saying that LMFAO. That's so shoujo coded lololol
Chapter 2
Page 18
- Jill had to stop Rizel from doing that cause he was about to Rizz up all the adventurers with how erotic he looked like
Page 19
- That's so unnecessary and gay lololol
Page 22
- Rizzing him up with a headpat? Nice.
Page 23
- "Absolute zero stud"??? That's fucking hilarious Holy shit HAHAHAHAH
Chapter 3
Page 14 panel 2
-how I feel everyday be like lol
Page 18 panel 2
- not the "stud-kun (~w~)
Page 22
-why the fuck is he punctuating every word? Also don't judge the book by it's cover. He's probably the dom in bed
Page 23 panel 1
- Love the way they're teaming up on Jill lololol
Page 26
- Announcing to them all that Jill is his? Damnnn
Page 37
- SO THIS IS LOVE? MHMHMHM-Cinderalla
Chapter 4
Page 19
-Jill why are glaring at him? ARE YOU JELLY?!
Chapter 5
Page 5
-Rizel rizzing up another man lol
Page 16
- Seemed more like flirting to me
Page 22
- Translation: "Don't abandon me pls huhuhu"
Chapter 6
Page 23
-Why is he saying it like he's confessing lmao
Page 31 panel 3
- Translation : "Stop interrupting our date, fucking dammit.
Chapter 7
-no comment cause I'm sleepy
Chapter 8
-still no comment cause I'm still sleepy. Page 28 is pretty gay tho... wait, That's a comment isn't it?
Chapter 9
-not sleepy cause I took a nap yey
Page 29
- This is so romance coded I swear- the way Jill tapped the back of his hand on Rizel's forehead is literally what characters who are so gone for each other do to their partner. Gayyyy
Chapter 10
Page 5
- The only clue that our Rizel was startle is the little jump on his hair lol
-the rest of the pages especially the fight is so gay I don't even need to say it cause it would speak for itself. Ugh Jill and Rizel is my otp fr
Chapter 10.5
Page 9
-he for sure wanted to do that too. Without anyone else to see tho
-the novel's cute af. What a smart wolf Shirley is <3
Chapter 11
- King-sama I gay for Rizel for real. He's being naruto for his Rizel lol. Gay gay gayyy
Chapter 12
Page 21
- OMG. THAT LINE EISNWIMEIWKWKW. ITS SO ROMANCE CODED. HOW DOES PEOPLE STILL THINK THEYRE STRAIGHT?!
Chapter 13
Page 10 panel 7
- yeah cause he fell for Rizel<3
Page 22
- lmao threesome cuddling?
Page 24
-love how they're both teasing him XD
Chapter 14
Page 9- Judge is so cute lol. A big puppy indeed
Page 21 panel 4
-Wtf Jill? The hell are you planning if Rizel said yes lmao
Chapter 15
-No comment cause I dunno
Chapter 16
Page 4
-not Rizel rizzing the man up so much that he gave him probable double the amount lol
Chapter 17
Page 34
- Nah you just awakened your inner masochist
Chapter 18
Page 24
- Kinky
Chapter 22
Page 34
- Gay snake lol
Chapter 23
Page 16
- lol gay
I forgot to write my thoughts for the other chapters cause I liked it so much lol. Also if y'all noticed I kept calling Lizel, Rizel.This is because In the first couple chapters that's what they said his name was and then I liked it better cause Lizel has so much rizz it makes sense to call him Rizel(no? OK...;( )
On another note, I wonder how this story would end. Especially when Lizel would need to go back to his world. I bet the others won't stand it and be super sad or want to go with them. Maybe he'll take Jill- ughhhh I hope they wouldn't all need to separateee.
Making something so cute this short should be illegal.