So many red flags but I’ll list a few:
- I don’t pity the FL because she chose to like him but even so behind her friends back. Btch that is a big no. You know what you were getting into, so her tears are worthless to me
- The usual rude obnoxious stupid coward ML
- if he loved the FL more than his wife, why did he even marry the wife in the first place but acted so pathetic because he was mourning her death ?
- another dumb Harlequin story
Wasn’t the greatest but wasn’t the worse yenno? Another arrogant, egotistical, uptight, over confident ML. And if the ML is like this, you all can imagine what the FL is like
Plot was great. Had romance, mystery, and suspense. I knew who the culprit was right away. As for the ML ducking pissed me off for jumping into conclusions. Glad there was no surprise pregnancy or made the ending with a wedding. Not sure how you can recover from the stupid stunt ML pulled. I understand it was his job but there was a better way to handle the situation. If someone pull that stupid bullshit with me, best believe I would’ve ran them over
Out of the upspree of Harlequin stories that were uploaded this one was the best. Had a decent plot and ML was a major dick. Read it!
Add it to the list of dumb and stupid stories. Not worth the read or to loose brain cells for the dumb plot
Was a dumb girl, just because he did one small of kindness you end up stalking the guy. He already has a gf and yet she continues to pursue him when he has been clear how he feels about her yet she “can’t stop” liking him. That’s not like, that’s freakin creepy and it’s call obsession. Fucking dumb btch. She’s ANNOYING AS HELL!!!
Typical pathetic weak boring FL. For the first time ML wasn’t an ass. He was respectful and communicated. FL was extremely annoying
Also I found it hilarious how SHE got mad at him when he didn’t try to look for her or said his actual name when SHE was the one who left without anything. Basically that’s a one night stand
The ML can listen to someone else rant/problems but won’t even give the time of day to is OWN freaking wife. Glad Fl is trying to think of ways to leave and be financially stable. Ugh this makes me loose my patience
I thought the story was funny and I liked it. The ending was a bit cliche lol
Totally agree with you. In the end I was like, "haha...this is stupid"