Was he blushing cuz of the blood or what was that smile tf
He giving accidental serial killer, but kind of liked it vibes or whatever
This was really good. I cried once, and honeslty if I was in a better mindset rn I think I'd have cried a lot more. I'm happy for him, he found a reason to live and changed day by day. It was really heartwarming g to see him interact more and more with his surroundings and people. And the proof of his hard work was heartwarming.
The plot was well written. I'm happy for him. The movie at the end too, amazing portrayal of Jay's efforts in the story
I don't get the dad.... It's your daughter yes, but that's also your son..?
To me, it seems like Dad never wanted kids but loved his wife a lot. Daughter reminds him of his wife but his sons are just like him so he doesnt care about them. Not very nice but it makes sense esp if hes as antisocial as he seems
Also Dad is clearly depressed at the start of the story and waiting to die, most likely bc of his wife. MC is his new lease on life so shes special to him
You brought up a good point, that makes sense.
He feels no attachment to the children of the love of his life, that's interesting
Wow I'd be so pissed if my best friend just left me suddenly and came back like this
I loved everything at the start till she left Ernon, after that everything started to feel rushed and it went downhill.
There was really no world building or understanding of the characters. We got to know of their past, but it felt like the author just slapped some sob story on random characters and called it a day. Soo many plot holes..
The war, which was the whole plot, just felt like it never happened, it felt so unimportant. The characters are supposed to focus on the war, but they're just blushing at Kasia. There was really no need for that harem plot because we literally didn't know who the "ml" was.
The clothes they wear.... Why do they have hoodies... Why are they not in armor when they're at war (it's how they literally introduced and symbolized that this isnt earth) ... There was no explanation of the wealth or status of this world, so I'm guessing commoners are rich asf to be wasting fabric on hoodie also. Idfk.
Everyone had some depressing or traumatizing childhood, but it was never explored properly. Most of the plot point were just never explained or made to be understandable. Their love story which literally just started suddenly at the end even though there was really no foundation for it considering Kasia was so indifferent to everything... I felt it when she was Etelle, but then it was abandoned.
There are just a lot of moments where I thought "damn that's stupid?".
For example night lady. what was up with that. She was literally only there to encourage Ernon x kasia.... Sage dude also... They're supposed to be at war, but they're so buddy buddy. It felt so unserious and like they were classmates having a good laugh. And when the emperor and his son was having their solo fight in the middle of the battlefield; the son was on the ground, took the emperors sword in his fucking hand when it was at his throat, and somehow caught the emperors arm?? This is literally a war
Also, where was the outfit in the cover. Why do they always wear sweaters that we would see on earth. The art style felt so "modern world + cute characters". When they're at war and should be wearing armor considering that's how they were introduced...
I'm so sad, I loved this, but I'm so disappointed.
Honestly... What was even the genre. It didn't focus on romance, yet that's what the ending is all about. It didn't focus on the war, even though that was what drove the whole plot. Is "world revolving around the OP character" a genre?
I read this all in 1 day also. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just a bit.. Lackluster. I liked it, but... A lot of complaints as you can see
I COMPLETELY agree with you also I leave the story for a few months and come back to a changed ml I was so shocked
Honestly I was so disappointed , they made her so emotionless to the point of ruining the actual story and relationship between characters was never established..
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