
The only thing I don't like is Hes saying/ thinking the world she's in now isn't real. She only just started thinking this might not just be a novel world. I just had a bad feeling for several chs because everything has been going well for her. I thought the ship wasn't going to sink, so then I freaking out that Cael's negotiations would fail. I wasn't expecting his carriage to crash like dude. Oh and they did the deed lmao
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I mean come on. Wouldnt you think you would do the same thing as well? I mean from the 1st chapter there are already some hints about her not believing that this is her new reality. Plus in her view, she thinks once she finishes her goal (which she doesnt know what it is or maybe she isnt aware there was never a goal to begin with.) her mission is done and she will return back to her original world.
Note: I reread it and it kinda sounds like Im telling you you're dumb for not noticing which that isnt the case so Im sorry for offending unknowingly.
I'm only on ch 2 but the new mc is judgy as hell. The og mc had every reason to act "awful" just by the new mcs description of the book. She can't relate to her because it didn't happen to her which is crazy. Also some called the new mc ugly and was glad they switched face but the only difference is the eye color/ hair style.